Yeee! :is giddy with the wonderful chapter: I like how Snape handled the situation. And I can't wait for Malfoy's reaction at Harry being made seeker! He's going to be so mad! Please love us all some more an update again quickly!
| Title: Chapter 9
| 07 Sep 2007 6:15 am
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| Reviewer: Cora (Anonymous)
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Hey, all I can say about your stories is that you make my day whenever you update one of them. Please continue to spoil me with you frequent updates.
Very nice retelling from a Slytherin perspective. Great update as usual!
| Title: Chapter 9
| 07 Sep 2007 6:09 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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Pretty realistic for a Slytherin Harry. At least he still has his sense of fair play. I hope he never looses that in your fic.
I can't wait to see how the home visit goes with the Dursleys. They're pathetic; I hope Snape crushes them into the oblivion. *growls*
Another wonderful chapter :) Like I said before, I like to see Harry standing up for himself (like with Zabini). I love how you've characterized him in this story.
I was about ready to swat Snape for his attitude, but it looks like everything is coming about :) now he can't be so insufferable, especially if Harry wins the Quidditch match!
I love teacher!Harry. Without Hermione around, I can see him falling into this role. And I really want to see the aftermath of a Slytherin protecting Neville's remembrall from another Slytherin.
Loved Snape's inner monologue in this and his interaction with Poppy.
I like this chapter. The only thing is, that I would have liked to see the confrontation between Malfoy and HArry. Had to be a bit more interesting since he is a Slytherin. Will we see it in the next chapter?
Author's Response: Yes. Therein lies the fun of slight overlaps and alternating point of views. :-) Thanks for the review!
I love that Snape is actually learning the truth! And the part where he realized why Harry wanted the owl post was great.
Love the story, please continue!!!
"See that you do," Severus told him, and left the common room before witnessing another sickeningly sweet display of the Brat's wonderfulness.
LOL! hehe. I love Snape's thoughts in this. Lovely. I like that Harry will stick up for others, that he's not TOO embarrassed about hand me downs and such to be quiet.
And hooray! Harry's going to do Quidditch still? I was worried that he would miss that. I wish I could have seen it acted out though. i LOVE that Snape is going to get Harry a broom. How's he going to do it?
thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Hi Jan, Thanks for the review! The next chapter will be from Harry's perspective, starting with "How I Made the Quidditch Team and Didn't Get Expelled." Hmmm, I think maybe Severus will have him write an essay on that topic for detention. . . ;-)
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