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Title: Chapter 8 06 Sep 2007 4:19 am
Reviewer: Vintage (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing! Personally I like this one more than Walk the Shadows and hope you update real soon!
Title: Chapter 7 06 Sep 2007 3:04 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "Indeed. You don't imagine you're the first child reluctant to speak of their health history, do you? We have a connection to Wizarding Child Services, who would only be too happy to come and spend some time with you." Madam Pomfrey smiled at him benignly, but he saw it for what it was. She was a great manipulator."

    Poppy Pomfrey. You are so positively Slytherin XD I like how she's all like, mkay I KNOW you're lying, so quit it.

    Snapey - you had better be at least a LITTLE bit shocked next chapter. I know this will be a long process, and that you and Harry will require quite some time to get used to each other and start putting old preconceptions behind and all that, but he is a Slytherin and you are his Head of House and he is your responsibility XD

    So chop chop! We know you want to C:
Title: Chapter 6 06 Sep 2007 2:56 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "Too still, really, for an eleven year old."

    ARG. SNAPEY - THE WORLD IS HANDING YOU LEMONS AND YOU'RE JUST LETTING THEM GO MOULDY.

    Honestly, man. Can't you take a hint? Your points are dropping faster than an anvil dropped off a cliff.

    "Suppressing a sigh, Severus ignored the stuttering Professor Quirrell beside him and swept from the Great Hall."

    I repeat: ARG. You are made of first-class idiot, Snapey. However, I do realise that when you
    FINALLY pull your head out of your arse and start looking at Harry, not the ghost of a dead man, you will be properly remorseful XD

    jharad17: you are definately made of something more awesome than awesome XD
Title: Chapter 5 06 Sep 2007 2:50 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Prefect Flint is added to my list of losers. As is Draco, because he is naturally a bit of a git and hasn't done anything to disprove my long-standing opinion of him. But please, feel free to prove me wrong!

    Teddy is teh awesomeness, because I remember JKR saying once that he and Draco were sort of like equals, except probably Teddy actually has something that we like to call FRIENDS, not mindless loser zombies XD

    Though I'm not too sure about Harry being in a House choc-full of Death Eater children ... but hopefully Snapey will step up to the plate and be all like, YOU SHALL NOT PASS! to the Death Eaters. And/or Voldemort, when he returns - really, I'm not fussy XD
Title: Chapter 4 06 Sep 2007 2:45 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "He felt a sharp pang of guilt, quickly suppressed; he did not believe in corporal punishment, having too often felt a heavy hand in his own youth, and he should not have let his emotions take him so completely by control this morning."

    Snapey - your burgeoning conscience slightly lowers you on my list of lewsers, but not by much, I'm afraid. Maybe if you got over your little Potter-loathing complex, maybe discovered that Harry has been viciously abused, and then decided to take him under your wing for the rest of your natural life, I MIGHT reconsider. But only maybe XD And only if it invovles lots of Snape/Harry LUFF moments.
Title: Chapter 3 06 Sep 2007 2:39 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    RON. You are officially added to my list of idiots.

    "Malfoy rolled his eyes. "Like I make conversation with these two, honestly."

    I rehash my earlier statement: Malfoy is a bit of a pretentious idiot/noob - Teddy, on the other hand, is awesome XD

    Harry is cute and small and frightened and I want to give him lots of big hugs and maybe some chocolate C:

    And I am going to add "Everywhere at once-ness" to my growing list of Snape-isms XD
Title: Chapter 2 06 Sep 2007 2:32 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "He had nursed the dread, worked it in his mind like clay, molded it into the perfect shape of his hate and desire for vengeance."

    Funny, perfect line XD

    Also - SNAPEY! You are soooo stupid sometimes. Honestly. Plus Slytherin as its own little militan organisation? Interesting XD I have this feeling that that's how the Bolsheviks began, before they like took over the whole of Russia XD

    Sneaky sneaky Slytherins XD
Title: Chapter 1 06 Sep 2007 2:26 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    I have a lot of love for this story. Which is surprising, because usually I have very little love at all for Slytherin!Harry, but gawd dammit if you don't just kick me in the arse and make me love it anyway XD

    Yeah so this is me saying: I care about this story. Really, I do XD
Title: Chapter 7 05 Sep 2007 10:48 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! That examination must have been tough. I'm sure he's glad it's over. Your Snape in this chapter was well done indeed!! Fantastic tension.

    "Snape sneered at him and leaned in close, so Harry could feel his breath on his face. Oddly, it smelt of peppermint; he'd been expecting old socks."

    LOL!

    "All right. And have you ever used drugs or alcohol?"

    "No!" What kind of stupid questions were these anyway?

    Too true. Some medical questions always seem stupid. Nice dose of reality there. The ending was great, how Harry was feeling good, but apprehensive about going back home. I suppose he thinks there's going to be a big blowout, just like the other times. I wonder if Pomfrey and Snape will inform Dumbledore about Harry.

    Thanks for the chapter!
Title: Chapter 6 05 Sep 2007 10:34 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, nice point of view! It made reflecting on the last chapter a lot easier. It's nice to know the things that Snape realizes and recognizes. Poor Harry.

    Nicely done tension in this. It's great! i'm enjoying your little Harry. Hehe, I loved when Snape went "don't make me drag you". Ack! I would have got up and ran too!

    Good chapter!

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