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| 04 Mar 2008 3:57 am
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| Reviewer: Tetsubinatu (Anonymous)
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Oh that was lovely! Very nice Luna with sympathetic and yet IC Snape. Good to see some action on this fic - thanks.
I get back from a girlie weekend in Spain to find you have made the return home bearable with a new chapter. Another goodie and worth the wait. So interesting to see the focus shift to Luna herself rather than just her as Harry's friend. Thank you so much for not abandoning the story. Big hug.
| Title: Contents Fragile
| 01 Mar 2008 6:22 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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Hello! I find your characters extraoridinarily vivid, more deeply developed than canon, and captivating! Add onto that intelligence and depth not usually attributed to each of them and it's no wonder people hunt you down for updates! I've spent my free time today entrenched in your universe; hoping that there was more to read. The reasoning behind Luna's apparent loopiness is that she's interpreting peoples spoken words for their true meaning? Interesting: But like Harry and Snape, she has a unique way of viewing the world as a result of her life to that point. The idea that a loving relationship will limit the damage done by the waking dreams potion just adds to the poignancy that much Luna's 'otherness' is due to the lack of said in her own life. I like the family your are bonding in this fic.
Author's Response: Thank you very kindly!
No! (sob) Please update soon, I don't be to be naggy, :) But as soon as you feel like making someones day (me for example ;)) Update or write some more of your chapter!
Scorpia
I ok at drawing flowers and the like, but people... Nope, nadda, zip. If I was I would be happy to draw a pic for your site, :)
An amazing chapter, please excuse my sillyness in the last review. Keep up the good work writing!
Scorpia
"Holy taco's Batman! Isn't this an amazing story?" (Blame this on a sugar mixed with great HP fanfiction rush) "It sure is Robin, you don't find stories like this everyday!"
Scorpia agrees with Batman & Robin and thinks that she is stupid for not reading this story sooner.
(Silly grin) Lol, :)
Scorpia
This is very good.
You have really added depth to Luna's character in this chapter.
I don't understand what caused Luna so much pain. Just physical strain on the wound? Or is something else wrong? You mentioned that it had been cursed...
I was so happy to see that you had updated, and I was not disappointed. Another superb chapter in one of my favorite stories. Thank you...
Snapey went & got drunk. (shakes head) Sigh, I guess I can understand why though, :) There would have to be something terrible wrong with me if I didn't, Lol.
As always, I loved this chapter, you have yet to dissapoit me and I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. And by the way, The Secret Garden is a wonderful book & I loved the way you described Snape reading it a couple chapters back. :)
Scorpia
| Title: For Your Immediate Attention
| 01 Mar 2008 2:48 am
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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How can I put into words how wonderful this chapter was? How about--Oh My gosh!! I luv, luv, luuuuuv this story, this chapter & you for posting it!! Lol, I'm on an emotional roller coaster thanks to this chapter and I never want to get of! Hehe, :P
Scorpia
| Title: To Whom It May Concern
| 01 Mar 2008 1:15 am
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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I'm awed by this chapter. The way Lunainteracted with Snape & Harry was a pure wonder! A couple of times I felt tears come into my eyes that had nothing to do with the onions I cut up for dinner, Lol. This is a wonderful story & I hope you continue it for a Loooooonnnnnnngggg time! Lol, :)
Scorpia
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