I felt like laughing and crying at different points in this chapter. When Harry & Snape hid behind the--um--*gravestone*--cough--I laughed out loud. I don't know why, I should of been mourning for Cedric. (shrug) I'm glad your involving Luna in Harry's dramatic experience. (grin)
Scorpia
I'm sorry I didn't reveiw this streight away, but my web was down, so I made one today. I am so INCREDABLY HAPPY you finally updated this story! I was so affraid you'd abandoned it, I was very upset. I LOVE reading this story, it is orrignal in ideas and all of them are great. I really enjoy reading Luna mixed in with this because I think that she is a good character and it is sweet that she looks to Snape like another father, as her own isn't that attentive. I also think it's sweet that Snape cares for her and Harry, they are all a bunch of wonderful characters and it's fun to read them together. You do a really good job writting the thoughts and emotions of the characters, especially when dealing with past or present problems. I am extremly pleased with the length of this chapter, it was wonderful and had alot of great content. This story is one of my absolute favorites. PLEASE, PLEASE post again soon!
Great story, can't wait for the next update,
Beth
I like Snape eithier way, snarky or kinda polite. :) I'm really starting to like Luna evan more then before thanks to this story! I hope she and Harry will become close friends--or more? :)
Such a long chapter! (Claps happily) Take a bow!! Lol, :)
Scorpia
| Title: We Tender Our Sincere Regrets
| 29 Feb 2008 9:24 pm
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(smile's thinly) If you think squels of outrage are bread & butter, mine will be honey butter!! How dare you leave this chapter here! You should be ashamed of your self, you naughty, naughty girl! Okay, done with the drama! Lol, I can't be mad at you. You wrote this beautiful, magnificent, marvelous, fantastic, (insert more words that I don't know how to spell) great chapter & great story!
Scorpia
LOL!! OoO! I LOVED this chapter!
"You do relise that my birthday isn't until January?" Lol, Severus! I can beleive that Sev likes Luna for the same reasons some people think he likes the Weasley twins. Luna is smart, but in a different way. I love her. :) Will this be a HL? I don't really care. Never was crazy about who Harry is pared with, as long as it isn't slash, :P. LOl, :)
Scorpia
| Title: In Consequence of the Missive
| 29 Feb 2008 8:23 pm
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I thought this first chapter was marvelous! Perfect grammar, spelling, punctuation, characterization. I'm glad you updated, now I'm going back over to reread everything. You know, after you read a lot of fanfiction it all starts to mold together untill you forget what stories what! Lol, :) Can't wait to read more about Snape! Loved the Luna & Harry interaction!
Scorpia
wonderful fic. I especially love the interactions between Snape and Luna, and Harry and Luna. Harry and Luna seem to fit together. I love how Snape has warmed up to Harr, and I loved his punishment for his Slytherins! Hope you update soon. Look forward to reading more.
Great chapter! Thanks so much for updating and I shall be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Thank you very much for continuing on with your story.
Good chapter. Lots of information about Luna -- all good -- but it makes me very curious about why we need to know so much about her.
Very intriguing.
This was fabulous. Thank you so much for updating! I remember back in the Fall when I used to literally cheer when I saw you'd updated your story, and today was no exception. It was as if you'd just updated yesterday...and that's saying a lot--your story has stuck with me for months.
The way you describe things is unique. When I finished this chapter, I felt like I had been holding my breath through the whole thing...like if I breathed, I would miss a word or something..lol.
Your version of Harry is as wonderful as always in this chapter. Of course, he would have to be put in a body bind... I'm not surprised there ;) I love how you described his lumpy appearance underneath the covers as Luna looked over at him. That whole scene was brilliantly described, as well as the scene where Luna decides to take a bath...it was as if I could feel her discomfort. I don't know how you do it, but your prose is incredibly stunning to read.
I hope you do continue this story soon, but a wonderful chapter like this is enough to sustain me until your next update whenever that may be :)
Thanks again, and keep up the exceptional work!
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