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Title: Upon Receipt 11 Dec 2007 7:52 am
Reviewer: lyra (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope the plan is still to finish this off ...I miss it ;)
Title: Upon Receipt 27 Nov 2007 11:00 pm
Reviewer: Caro (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Have only just discovered your stories and am absolutely loving them!! - very much hope you add more soon!!
Title: Upon Receipt 19 Nov 2007 11:47 pm
Reviewer: Zizrastaen (Signed) [Report This]
    What else should I have felt but—" agonizing, gut-clenching terror, "concern?"

    *laughs, long and loud*

    "Ridiculous boy," he says gruffly—and then he brushes the hair back from the pale forehead, and pulls the covers up under his chin. The room is dark, after all, and they are alone.

    Perfect. Perfect Snape.

    Um. I love you. This is wonderful, and I happily await more.

    Gah! Anyway... I'm going to add this to my favorites, and check the little box that allows me to know when updates happen. Thank you.
Title: Please Respond 19 Nov 2007 11:05 pm
Reviewer: Zizrastaen (Signed) [Report This]
    Gah!

    (I've given up on writing reviews with actual words, at least temporarily. You know how I feel anyway. :)
Title: Handle With Care 19 Nov 2007 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Zizrastaen (Signed) [Report This]
    ...

    I'd just be repeating myself.

    Can't resist, though: Except to say that there are tears in my eyes.
Title: For Your Immediate Attention 19 Nov 2007 10:15 pm
Reviewer: Zizrastaen (Signed) [Report This]
    ... I realize that my reviews seem to be getting less coherent with each chapter. I think this speaks for itself.

    There is one thing, however, which I remember noting: You write each characters vulnerabilities so touchingly and realistically, and they use these to sort of be there for each other.

    Snape and Dumbledore's interaction really felt like the relationship we caught glimpses of during Rowling's later books. The ending of this chapter is powerful, with a quiet, intense sort of tone.

    Let me say again, thank you for the time and effort and everything you took to write this story, and just for writing in general. *goes to read the next chapter*

    Ooh, and I like that Snape likes the girl in Secret Garden. That's a cool observation.
Title: To Whom It May Concern 19 Nov 2007 9:38 pm
Reviewer: Zizrastaen (Signed) [Report This]
    Bits I, for some reason or another, wanted to mention:

    'he is too quick to notice the same kind of pain in others.

    She really likes him quite a lot.'


    "It's bigger on the inside,"

    Gasp! Have you watched Doctor Who?

    And the ending - would you be horribly creeped out if I said I loved you again? 'Cause that is... aah.
Title: In Care Of, Part Two 19 Nov 2007 9:18 pm
Reviewer: Zizrastaen (Signed) [Report This]
    Among all the wonderfulness (I'm afraid I don't have any constructive criticism - sorry for that), there were two lines which illustrate the wonderful subtlety which is a part of what I think makes your writing so effective.

    'and do something quite Unforgivable.'

    'His knees are less steady than he prefers them.'

    And the scene with the two on the couch is done fantastically in character.

    Have I told you lately that I love you? *grins*
Title: In Care Of, Part One 19 Nov 2007 8:55 pm
Reviewer: Zizrastaen (Signed) [Report This]
    'The relief that blossoms over his teacher's face makes Harry feel rather warm inside; of course, he might be hemorrhaging.' *laughs and applauds* And thus you keep the tone from becoming too unrealistically sappy.

    'Snape's lip quirks in a faint, sad sort of smile. "Yes, Potter," he says. "Me too."' ... I love you. Love this. The description of Snape's voice as drawling, also, is wonderfully accurate.

    This story makes me forget that anything else exists, when I read it. As any fantastic and wonderful story tends to do. :)

    *goes to read more*
Title: We Tender Our Sincere Regrets 19 Nov 2007 8:29 pm
Reviewer: Zizrastaen (Signed) [Report This]
    You are *fantastic*. I'm sorry if I don't have specific examples, but I refer to the story as a whole. And the one that comes before it.

    The characters are written wonderfully, and their relationship changes without becoming a bit out of character. I *love* your writing style. As a side note, I love your Luna. She is marvelous.

    Thank you for writing!

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