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Title: Felicitations 27 Aug 2007 12:30 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! This is so good. Now I'm absolutely dying to read the next chapter. I can't wait! Everyone is characterized perfectly. Keep it up!
Title: Felicitations 26 Aug 2007 11:23 pm
Reviewer: Anne Squires (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I simply can't wait to read about Friday's Potion class and it's aftermath. I'm glad Harry's in on it.
Title: In Consequence of the Missive 26 Aug 2007 11:03 pm
Reviewer: Anne Squires (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So,Harry and Snape are starting up a correspondence. This will be very interesting.

    I like the way you use Luna's character as a sympathetic sounding board for Harry. I wonder if this story will develop a Harry/Luna ship? I did note that Ginny did not visit Harry in the infirmary. I thought that was odd; unless, of course, in this story it's Harry/Luna and not Harry/Ginny. I don't really care either way. Just curious, I suppose.
Title: Felicitations 26 Aug 2007 9:20 pm
Reviewer: jharad17 (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape blinks at him, feeling as though the world has shifted on its axis. "You do realize," he says, "that my birthday is not until January."

    I love that line!

    I'm very glad you decided to do a sequel, and it seems off to a great start. I also quite like epistolaries, and hope you keep that correspondence trope going as well.

    The only concern I had was for the odd fluxuation, especially in chapter one, of verb tenses. Whereas things that happened in the past in a story which is written in "simple past tense" should be in "past perfect," if the story is written in "present tense," things that happened in the past should be written in "simple past." Does that make sense?

    Thanks again for continuing your wonderful tale.
Title: Felicitations 26 Aug 2007 8:08 pm
Reviewer: Miri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    May your soul boat float most buoyantly! :)

    It was lovely to wake up to this chapter, and I am *so* looking forward to the forthcoming 'potions incident'.

    I love the way Snape talks: "That feat is not in the scope of human accomplishment." Perfect. Absolutely, perfectly, precisely, snarkliy Snape. :)

    Sincerely,
    Annette
Title: Felicitations 26 Aug 2007 7:36 pm
Reviewer: elocution (Signed) [Report This]
    *chokes*

    i! love! your! snape!

    seriously..."you do realize that my birthday is not until january?!" and...

    "he squirmed like a toad in the early stages of vivisection"?!

    and of course, the oh so subtle -H- in the beginning of the letter...*grins*...oh, the warm and fuzziness...

    i'm really excited about the class on friday...and, a letter from the Dursley King? this shall be fun...
Title: Felicitations 26 Aug 2007 7:16 pm
Reviewer: Solitare (Signed) [Report This]
    *claps* Excellent chapter looking forward to more! Lit up my day before work thanks! Skittles to you!!

    P.S Hurry up and write the next chapter! =p
Title: Felicitations 26 Aug 2007 7:00 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    You write Dumbledore very well. On the one hand, he doesn't appear to recognize that if Snape has lost much of his desire to berate Harry, then he gets no payback for the "indignity" of a public "dressing down." He just has to suffer it after a bit of acting. Dumbledore comes across as unconcerned about Snape's discomfort in favor of Harry's discomfort. On the other hand, we also see Dumbledore exhibiting a great deal of trust in Snape. He trusts him, in part, to be willing to be used.

    Snape's letter at the end made me feel somewhat better about the whole thing, since Snape is clearly unwilling to allow Harry to think the upcoming incident is real.
Title: Felicitations 26 Aug 2007 6:38 pm
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Very awesome. :-)

    I really liked the letters. Snape is so amazingly in character even though he's having to step outside his canon-self's comfort zone. Harry's great, too.

    I really look forward to more.
Title: Felicitations 26 Aug 2007 5:25 pm
Reviewer: Chironstar (Signed) [Report This]
    *squeals*

    YES!!! An update! *dances* Oooh, I so love those letters! I can't wait to see the "incident"! Please update soon! I can't wait to read the next part!!!

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