Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 17 07 Dec 2007 5:58 pm
Reviewer: Kristi Parrish (Signed) [Report This]
    YUP yup I really like it !! keep it up

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Glad you do!
Title: Chapter 16 03 Dec 2007 3:51 am
Reviewer: B. E. Skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter, please continue this!

    Author's Response: Thank you, and I am working on the next chapter tonight!
Title: Chapter 16 02 Dec 2007 10:45 am
Reviewer: Anaknisatanas (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great story. I love the interactions between Harry and Severus. I can't wait to see what happens now that Harry is back attending classes.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  And Harry does have a big year ahead!
Title: Chapter 16 30 Nov 2007 6:43 am
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww!! I love this! Poor Harry, and awesome Severus! This chapter was just brilliant!

    I love the discriptions of Harry's trepidation at returning to class, especially Potions. It also fits perfectly that he would feel that way about asking Severus for help, he's helped him so much already. Also liked how Harry reacted to Neville's body bind, although it felt a little out of character for him to divulge that piece of information so bluntly. But then again, he wanted to tell them in as few words as possible. I'm so glad that Harry and Severus have progressed this far, it really was a long way.

    Sorry for the short review, but it was a truly impressive chapter and I can't wait for more!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it!  I got a rather mean review on FF.N about Severus in this chapter, so I'm so happy that people here liked it!  I do think Harry might feel a little nervous about returning to class, so much has happened to him.  He knows that things are different between him and Severus now, but I think deep inside he still has some issues about the past--they really haven't dealt with it, after all.  But they have come a long way, and they'll get through it.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 16 29 Nov 2007 1:44 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great Chapter. Loved the nice tender scene between Severus and Harry. I liked too, the info about some of Snape's Slytherins wanting revenge on him. Good details. Can't wait for more.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I love writing the scenes with Severus and Harry.  I'm still debating on how much the Slytherins (mainly Draco)  will figure into the story, but I thought I should put in something about them and how they're reacting to the news about Severus.  Thanks again! 
Title: Chapter 16 28 Nov 2007 10:42 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm SO glad that Severus kept his temper.

    Author's Response: Yes, that was a good thing, wasn't it?  If he'd lost it, Harry would have a very hard time trusting him again.  Thanks!
Title: Chapter 16 28 Nov 2007 3:18 pm
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed) [Report This]
    A great chapter again - especially the description of Harry's feelings. I like the interactions between Snape and Harry in your story!
    Hope to talk to you again, soon :-)
    teddy

    Author's Response:

    Hi, Teddy,

    Thanks so much!  I'm glad you liked it.  Harry and Severus are always fun to write!

Title: Chapter 16 28 Nov 2007 7:36 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter! I'm glad that Severus didn't make a big deal out of Harry not knowing the answer. And finally Harry is able to attend classes with his arms healed. I liked how Harry almost freaked out over the body bind from Neville. That shows that he isn't some superperson that got over the kidnapping incident really quickly. Great chapter and I am eagerly awaiting more!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Harry does still have lots of issues from the past--the kidnapping, Severus' past treatment, his life with the Dursleys--that he's trying to forget and ignore, but he's going to have to deal with them at some point.  It won't be easy for him, but he does have people who love him and will help him get through it.  Thanks again.
Title: Chapter 16 28 Nov 2007 6:25 am
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    Boy - giving points to Gryffindor! That's a big move for Snape!

    As always, loved how you wrote the Harry and Snape interactions. His very tender "talk" at the end was so touching.

    Thanks for the new chapter and looking forward to the next.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Severus has really come a long way, but he does want to show Harry that things are different, and praising him in class and giving points to Gryffindor was a surefire way of doing it, at least that was what Severus had planned.  Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 16 28 Nov 2007 5:11 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a really great chapter, I'm glad that Severus recognized there was a problem with Harry instead of baiting him into a fight like in the past. It's good to see him encourage Harry to come to him if he has any problems, it's going to be a very large step in the right direction for the both of them. Really looking forward to more, keep up the awesome work and please please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response:

    Hey, thanks!  I'm glad you liked it!  It will be a big step for Harry and Severus if Harry learns to come to him for help, but that's going to be hard for Harry.  He's not used to going to any adult for help, and he still has some issues about Severus' past treatment, for all that he's trying to forget it.  I'll try to begin the next chapter tonight.

     

       


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