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Reviews For Brothers, Fathers, and Professors
Thanks Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update soon, but I've been very busy lately and just haven't had the time.
I absolutely LOVE your Story and the prequel! Please update soon!!!!!! Tobias is the coolest person ever and I really like the way you display the family structure and interaction, and of course the Harry and Sev brother scenes! What the hell is that thing that has taken Harry, the Captain and McGonagall? and if you dare to make it kill tobias I will hex you into the next century (I can try anyways...)!!!!!!! So please, update sooooon!!!!! Seria Author's Response: Thanks I'l update as soon as possible. You'll find out about the creature soon. Thanks for the review!
The interconnected rooms seem like a maze, probably mental. If the voice is in Harry's head, is he producing it? Author's Response: I can answer only one thing: the Map only shows the rooms the maurdaurs put on it (which is why it didn't show the room of requirement). If I answer the other question I'll give the story away, but I must say you've gotten closer then anyone else who's reviewed. Thanks for the review!
harms (harm's) way where (were) Author's Response: I can't answer many questions. But I promise the creature is totally unrelated to the blood quill. (though that is a good idea) Thanks for the review!
Touching interaction between Severus & Harry. Dumbledore ask(ed) dark(-)haired Author's Response: Not imperio. You'll find out latter. :) Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: I'll try to update soon. The next chapter is about half-way done. Thanks for the review!
Loved the interaction between Tobias and Harry, and Tobias' realization that his offspring are more alike than not. he's (his) sons then (than) his dad last years (year's) test through (threw) a handful step(ped) through Author's Response: I figured it was time for everyone (especially Tobias) that Sev and Harry are very much alike. thanks for the review! Author's Response: I figured it was time for everyone (especially Tobias) to realize that Sev and Harry are very much alike. thanks for the review! Author's Response: I figured it was time for everyone (especially Tobias) to realize that Sev and Harry are very much alike. thanks for the review!
Severus is going to wait for his child to be born before he bolts--oddly poignant. The caller? Guessing it's Umbridge The creature? a blood-sucking bugbear? A manticore? Or my fave creepy creature: a lethifold. The Granger's (Grangers) then (than) we were not as sever (severe) you're (your) concern wine(-)coloured Author's Response: LOL. I love the cross over suggestion. I give you full permission to use any and all characters I 'created'/borrowed if you so choose to undertake the mission. *sigh* the creature. I will tell only that I created it from my own imagination with a few minor influences. Thanks for the review!
Tobias seems to be teaching Muggle Studies, not History of Magic. Nice ending. were being subtlety (subtlely) encouraging youngest (younger) son got to(o) close to you mortified (I think you mean terrified) how good of a man (how good a man) Author's Response: I had to add that line about him having girls. I've wanted to put it in since the begining, but couldn't find a place till now. :) Thanks for the review!
The interactions between Tobias and his sons are very well done. Severus's (Severus') high(-)pitched, overly(-)cheerful over reacted (overreacted) dad bid (bade) older mans (man's) eyes His fathers (father's) office sipped on his tea (sipped his tea) curtained(-)off to be lead (led) off youngest (younger) Author's Response: No, not a vampire. You'll find out in a few chapters. Thanks for the reveiw! |
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