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Title: As the World Turns 28 Jan 2008 8:20 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    God, I hate the abbreviation "Mione". It would be pronounced "Moi-ney", which is not very likely, and is NEVER found in the books.

    Serenity seems to be Eileen without the refreshing honesty. It is only too likely that Severus would choose a woman like his mother...psychologically speaking. They do.

    Filus (Filius)

    then (than) how he entered

    claming (calming)

    his oldest (older) son

    cold(-)hearted.

    Author's Response:

    I tried to draw as many possible connections as possible between Eileen and Serentiy.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: History Repeats Itself 28 Jan 2008 5:32 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay, Serenity doesn't give any reasons why she doesn't want to be ye mum. She isn't particularly ambitious, or she wouldn't be running a bookstore in a backwater town. Whassup? Does she feel a magical child (and/or hubby) would put her at a disadvantage? (I would).

    Anyway, I am continually fascinated by the lack of birth control in the WW.

    Tobias' first class was both characteristic and funny.

    house wife (housewife)

    is producing you(r) children

    Filus (Filius)

    else where (elsewhere)

    whenever you('ve) decided

    teachers ('s) entrance

    Severus's (no final s)

    she-demon (what's this a reference to? Is Eileen non-human?)

    close (to) my age

    You're (your) grandfather

    look at he (the) girls

    Author's Response:

    You'll find out about Serenity in chapter 3.

    Glad you enjoyed Tobias's class.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: At the Beginning 27 Jan 2008 9:57 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I didn't think it was dull at all. Poor Harry adjusting to the regime of a strict parent, and Severus getting his jollies from watching the show, is hilarious.

    "...food for the castle." I didn't understand this reference at all. (?)

    Severus's (shouldn't have the s on the end)

    But...you have stopped ending "Dursleys" with a possessive! Hooray!

    overbroad (overboard)

    caus(u)ally;

    its (it's) 10 or nothing

    hadn't lock(ed) his door

    Author's Response:

    Glad you didn't think it was dull. I feel for Harry, but Severus is absolutely hilarious.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: To Play the Game 13 Jan 2008 10:08 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was an excellent chapter! It's killing me to wait though to see what will happen next. Could it be some kind of Boggart related creature? It seems like it was trapping them in bad memories or something so that made me start wondering. Anyways, pretty pretty please (with cherries on top!) update again soon!

    Author's Response:

    I'll update as soon as possible.

    No, the creature is not related to a boggart. I really can't tell you anything else because I don't want to give anything away. You shall find out soon enough.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: To Play the Game 13 Jan 2008 9:00 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    My thought are that I hope you post a new chapter quick or I might scream. Lol
    Cliff hangers rock!

    Author's Response:

    lol.

    I'm working on the next chapter, but it will probably be a week or two at least before its posted.

    And I'm glad someone appreciates cliffies.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Purple People Eater 13 Jan 2008 8:50 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Purple people eater...wasn't that a song or a ryme? I used to know it.
    Good chappie!

    Author's Response:

    Its a really old song, but still kinda popular.

    "one eyed, one horned, flying purple people eater..."

    Remember now?

    I actually just couldn't think of a good title and at was the fist thing that popped into my head. *shruggs*

    Thanks for the review!

Title: The Only Thing to Fear 13 Jan 2008 8:45 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! (Aplause) Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Knowledge is a Dangerous Thing 13 Jan 2008 8:36 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Protective older brothers ROCK!! Lol
    Go Sev! I LOVE cliff hangers, I know, weird. lol :)
    Scorpia

    Author's Response:

    I have a love hate relationship with cliffies. I love writting them, but I don't like reading them in other stories.

    Thanks for the review.

Title: Revelations, Good and Bad 13 Jan 2008 8:20 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's going to be an uncle! lol :)

    Two chapter in one week is very good! I hardly ever get two chapters in a month! I know it's horrible. :(

    Author's Response:

    Personally I can't wait until the baby's born and I'm the author. I have some great moments planned out. (grins evily)

    And don't worry the updates will, unfortunatly become more sporatic. :(

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Close Encounters 13 Jan 2008 8:10 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it whens theres monsters in Hogwarts! It adds danger and excitement! I'm angry at Serenity. Grrr.

    Author's Response:

    lol.

    Monsters are fun to play with. :)

    Don't worry I'm angry at Serenity too, but that probably a good thing.

    Thanks for the review!


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