What a fabulous beginning! I loved Severus' thoughts, and he's got some clues to Harry's true nature already. I wonder how long it will take him to see...
Great job!
Wow! What a great beginning!
I am just enjoying your writing SO much! Your depiction of everyone's thoughts and feelings; your ability to keep all the characters so close to canon--it's all wonderful!
What a delightful snowfight! I really enjoy your depiction of Severus' and Minerva's friendship.
You keep expressing not only Severus' and Harry's, but McGonagall's thoughts and feelings as well--so very well!
Even better! An angry, ANGSTY chapter--the best!
You are so good! Your sleight-of-hand at chapter's beginning, when you KNEW you had us believing that was Harry--was just inspired!
I love the way Severus played Draco like a musical instrument! Another "10" for you!
What a lovely chapter! The way you showed McGonagall's concern, and had her draw out Harry was just brilliant.
I really love the way you ended it, with Harry's exhortation for her to "Thump him with a big cold wet one for me!"
I'm giving you a "10" for this one--and I usually only do that for the really angsty chapters!
Heh, heh--looks like Severus may incrementally be becoming fonder of Harry in spite of himself!
Great start! I just found this story, thanks to the latest poll (of completed stories). I'm so glad to have found this!
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