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Reviews For Equilibrium
Title: Chapter 8 05 Sep 2007 11:23 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "Do not mistake my assistance for any kind of favor, Mr. Potter. It's strictly a case of self-interest, I assure you. If I am to be forced to read your pathetic essays in future, I will at least insure that they are legible. Now, off with you!"

    Lol. Liar. That was totally your subconscious telling you that you are an idiot and that Harry-bloody-Potter is currently wriggling his way under your skin.

    Snapey Snapey - you can lie to yourself, to Harry, and to Dumbledore, but a fangirl always knows XD

    Author's Response: Not to mention fanboys.
Title: Chapter 7 05 Sep 2007 10:58 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    I never really thought about the whole quill thing, even though I know that writing with a fountain pen is like seriously hard and NOT FUN XD

    I like how Snape is like, yeah, I'm giving you lessons with learning a quill because I don't want to have to read grossly ink-splattered essays and NOT because I'm secretly starting to like you even just a teensy bit. XD

    Yeah x)

    Author's Response: I tried to learn caligraphy once...it was a pain - and that was with modern utensils!  I always wondered how little Muggleborn first years learned to use a quill.
Title: Chapter 6 05 Sep 2007 10:42 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    I do like it when Snape discovers his paternal instincts XD. I also like it when he hides it beneath a veneer of general nastiness - because that's so Snape-ish and also because it would be really weird if Snape suddenly started acting like a mother hen.

    At least this way he can hide behind his "I'm-a-professor-therefore-it's-my-duty-to-look-at-the-students-even-though-I-hate-them" mask XD

    Author's Response: I'm trying really hard to allow Severus nurturing instincts without eroding his snarky sarcasm and aloofness...a very tricky tightrope to walk!  I don't care for OOC Snapes who are instantaneously loving, warm and fuzzy....it strips this wonderful character of the traits we all adore him for in the first place!
Title: Chapter 5 05 Sep 2007 10:11 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Go on, Snapey - embrace your conscience XD

    "With this bitter thought, Snape turned to his grading, slashing brutally through the pathetic essays with considerable red ink and ill-will."

    That is, just so you know, one of the most perfect lines dealing with Snape that I have ever read XD

    Author's Response: Dearest Sweartoad!  I love your reviews.  I particularly like the way you pick out a line you enjoyed. . .thanks so much...and you're NOT a lazysauce!
Title: Chapter 4 05 Sep 2007 8:22 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "Abruptly, Club left him, ripped from his fist. Dumbfounded, he looked about for it. Club had never left him before. Movement above caught his eye and he lifted his gaze. Club floated over his head."

    I think maybe I'll start each review with my favourite line/section. Because that one bit was freaking hilarious XD. Also, the burgeoning relationship between Harry and Snape unfolds - honestly, Snapey, why hide it? (except, of course, for the fact that, if he didn't hide it the entire this entire fanfiction would be like, Harry was sorted ... Snape melted into puddles of love and protectiveness for the boy, determined to take him away from his horrible relatives and raise him as his own. The End.)

    XD

    Author's Response:

    Don't we wish. . . .well, sometimes anyway.

Title: Chapter 3 05 Sep 2007 8:17 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow - that whole thing about gratitude is so completely true, especially after reading DH. Yeah.

    We all know Snapey is a Gryffindor at heart XD

    Author's Response: And a little Hufflepuff too - way deep inside. . . .but don't ever let Snape hear you say it!
Title: Chapter 2 05 Sep 2007 8:14 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    " Her green robes swirled with a turbulent flair even Snape could appreciate."

    Lol. That just made me laugh. Also, the friendship between Snape and McGonagall is so nicely done - I think a lot of people just tend to make Snape his own island, with no friends or whatever, so it's nice to see that he shares a friendly rivalry with McGonagall XD

    Author's Response: I love both Snape and McGonagall - their friendship will develop more in future.
Title: Chapter 9 05 Sep 2007 8:10 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    aw poor Sev X(

    Author's Response: Self-understanding sucks, don't it.
Title: Chapter 1 05 Sep 2007 8:02 am
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! I was wondering why this story wasn't up here ... but now it is so "yays" all around!

    Yeah, I'm like one of those people who read this story at ff.net but never reviewed ... because I am made of lazysauce ...

    Anyway I always really did like your Snape and your Harry XD This chapter is a really nice way to start things off - plus Snape is just so cute when he's all like NOOOOOO about Lily's eyes. Yeah. Great chapter XD

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm glad you like it!  (lazysauce....great phrase! I like it.)
Title: Chapter 5 05 Sep 2007 5:55 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Glad to see this excellent story on this site!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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