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Reviews For Equilibrium
Title: Chapter 24 02 Jun 2022 7:28 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for this amazing story! I’m so glad that there’s a sequel. Thanks also for calling out the absurdity of leaving a baby on a doorstep at night in the fall, without even informing the residents of the domicile. I hope they don’t wait too long to check up on Harry this summer. Off to read the sequel!
Title: Chapter 23 02 Jun 2022 7:22 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    The reactions to the leaving feast were spot on. Thanks so much for highlighting the unfairness of it all for the Slytherin kids and Snape. I liked that Snape tried to get Harry to open up, and I hope that Harry does soon.
Title: Chapter 22 02 Jun 2022 7:16 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That was such a fun scene! I really like the tentative friendship between Harry and Draco. I hope that Snape is just as watchful once Harry returns to the Dursleys.
Title: Chapter 21 02 Jun 2022 7:08 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the tenderness that Snape showed in the infirmary, and the conversation between him and Harry that followed.
Title: Chapter 20 02 Jun 2022 7:00 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Terrific chapter. I hope that Severus opens his eyes to Dumbledore’s machinations soon. The chapter end was funny and touching.
Title: Chapter 19 02 Jun 2022 6:52 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Evil Dumbles sending them on a wild goose chase! I’m looking forward to the action ahead.
Title: Chapter 18 02 Jun 2022 6:45 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Great confessions! Thanks for the fun chapter.
Title: Chapter 17 02 Jun 2022 1:24 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m more glad than ever that Snape is on Harry’s side and will protect him from Dumbledore’s machinations.
Title: Chapter 16 31 May 2022 6:58 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    There were several insightful phrases in this chapter that stood out (i.e., how children feel often influences how they learn, and Dumbledore being dismissive with a gentle condescension, amongst others). Thanks for the great, introspective chapter.
Title: Chapter 15 31 May 2022 1:08 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I appreciate how comfortable Harry is becoming with Snape to be able to broach his concerns with him. The chapter end was lovely.

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