love the snake bit...i wish i could talk to snakes...that would be awesome!~
great story!
kill filch...i would..j/k i wonder where this little surprise will lead...siberia....
you are a genius...i wonder why jkr didn't have percy sorted into slytherin...he is very ambitious.
nice work
Yay! A new chapter! :-)
OK, this one really played havoc with my heart.
It tightened with fear with the thought of the dementors near Hogwarts.
It jumped with joy at the thought of thw Weasley's accepting the Fidelius so readily to keep not only Harry but 'a former deatheater' safe.
It melted and sighed "ahhh" when Severus told Harry he had more important things to do than make potions.
And lastly it broke andmade me cry when it read "He had never had someone look proud of him before"
Thanks for the early morning cordio-calisthenics!
| Title: Chapter 17
| 31 Mar 2008 6:51 am
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did Lily love Severus or James romantcilly ?
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| 28 Mar 2008 5:12 pm
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Loving the sequel. Please update soon.
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| 21 Mar 2008 12:01 pm
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I don't know that I want to be anything with marshmallow since I'm allergic but I love your story Whelp and what you have written here in the sequel. Harry is soooooo cute and Severus is trying his hardest. How in the name of Merlin's pointy hat are you going to resolve the whole 'innocent Black' situation? I look forward to your next post.
~Charli
| Title: Chapter 17
| 20 Mar 2008 1:53 pm
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Hallo, I like your story so much. I am from Slovakia and I would like to translate your story to slovak. I want to ask you, if I can. Then I would like to publish your story on my web page uneder your name of course.If you concur in it, please, write me on ailam@centrum.cz thank you so much.
I love this chapter and also like the way Severus doesn't attempt to shield harry from the bad news by pretending he's too young to understand, kids understand a lot more than we think they do and they can also handle a lot more bad news than we think they can. I think the best policy when dealing with a child is honest, as much as possible, unless there's a very good reason to keep the truth from them.
Love the cat, by the way! I always put animals in my stories, my current Harry Snape story has a little beagle in it!
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