| Title: Chapter 11
| 12 Nov 2007 8:29 am
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| Reviewer: Eva (Signed)
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Oh, it's alright if your updates are a little late because though we would miss it, your health and work is more important.
Brilliant chapter by the way. I loved it and Hagrid was so very nice, I mean to say, understanding. Mrs. Weasley was portrayed superbly. Way to go!!!
| Title: Chapter 11
| 12 Nov 2007 5:42 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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Why are you apologizing to us? This is an outstanding piece of amature fiction. My 72 year old mother loved the first story and is on tenderhooks waiting for the sequal to be finished so she can read a hard copy (she's very computer phobic). Personally, I can type like the wind but can't figure out an original story line to save my life. On top of that, my favorite PROFESSIONAL AUTHORS only publish a new book or addition in their series about once or twice a year!!!! So I get an afternoon of terriffic story and then nothing for longer than I care for. I'm grateful that you want to continue your story and share it with us for free. I can tell you're a femal because only we have built in guilt complexes. Sorry RL is hard right now. More sorry about this rant. Hopefully, writing is something you do for fun and not another burden. I look forward to seeing your next update. I think Harry was very brave to tell Mrs. Weasley the truth when he still has trouble telling his Da. One question? How are the twins doing so much magic if they don't have a wand and no access to potions yet???
I hope you're beginning to feel better now, or that you will be soon. I still get as excited as ever to see your updates, and I'll admit that somehow they're almost *more* special when we get them once a week or so :) But... when you go back to you 2-3 a week, I'm be plenty thrilled as well ;)
That was really a very sweet chapter. I love how he was able to communciate with Mrs. Weasley, and I hope he'll begin to trust her more as time goes on. She's such a sweet person -- I would have loved her to death, if she'd been my teacher growing up, lol. That's not to say I don't love her regardless. She's awesome. Anyway, I was also really happy that Hagrid and Fang found Harry -- Lord knows what could've happened had they not.
Looking forward to more, as always!
| Title: Chapter 10
| 11 Nov 2007 11:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Autumn (Anonymous)
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I cannont tell you how much I love this story.
Before I go to school everyday, while I'm eating my ceral, I check my email and Whelp. Every time you update I get to happy I can hardly contain myself. I read so fast through the story that I sometimes have to go back and reread because I find myself missing things.
You are such a great author and the plot of your story is very catchy and addicting. The relationships are perfect.
And what I can I say? I'm a sucker for the whole harryabsuedscapehelpsbecomesfather story.
Nice Job and Keep up the wonderful work. I am really enjoying your story. Oh, and update soon!
| Title: Chapter 10
| 06 Nov 2007 11:20 pm
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| Reviewer: rosemaryeve (Anonymous)
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wonderful story, I am really enjoying it.
| Title: Chapter 10
| 05 Nov 2007 2:05 am
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| Reviewer: infiniteviking (Anonymous)
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Poor kid! I'm enjoying your characterization, and Snape's reliance on Mrs. Weasley is awfully sweet. Great story; can hardly wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 10
| 04 Nov 2007 10:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Why are their no mind healers in the wizarding world to help poor Harry. As for his identity, they could put him under a glamour or get a binding vow from the healer first. Mrs. Weasley doesn't seem to know what she's doing for all the advice she gave Sev, especially as more than half her attention is on her own kids. Why doesn't Sev hire his own sitter just for Harry?
Poor Harry, he's still got a lot of healing to do. I'm so glad that Severus is able to be supportive and give Harry what he needs, even if he has to venture out of his own comfort zone to do so.
I'm really curious to see how Molly and the Weasley kids will react to Harry's running off, and earlier how he protected his food from everyone.
The Weasleys kids are really wonderful, but if they don't understand Harry's history, they might be inclined to either laugh, or feel insulted, or just think Harry's plain crazy. I wonder if Molly will explain some of the abuse Harry's suffered to them, so they will understand and be compassionate. Or if she thinks it would be too much of a violation of privacy.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
Harry's very sweet in this chapter. I liked Molly, too. I like how you have her treating the kids. It's very Molly like. Good chapter!
Yay new chapter! I love the Weasley's and Snape in this.
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