| Title: Chapter 8
| 14 Oct 2007 3:02 am
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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::coos::
I love it! It's so adorable to see Sev keeping a close watch on his son. He acts calm and collected but beneath... there's a protective father waiting to pounce. ::grins::
Please, update when you can. I look forward to more.
Yours,
Lady Julie Snape.
With the twins added to the mix, havoc will surely occur! Keep up the super awesome writing! :)
Oh. That was different. "No, Father. It feels fine today. Madam Pomfrey fixed it real good."
"She fixed it really well."
"Yep."
Father laughed softly and reached for his cup of coffee. "Finish your breakfast, silly imp."
**Those lines made me smile. Actually, I smiled quite a few times as I read this chapter. I'm glad Harry isn't too ashamed. I was also happy to see a quick recovery. You've written the Weasleys well. Ginny is adorable, and she really hasn't even said much yet...lol. She's always been one of my favorite characters in HP.
As for writing at work...I'm actually going to try that next week. I have parent-teacher conferences for the first time in my life, and between appointments, I'm going to force myself to write. Hopefully YOU don't have to work too often, so you can keep updating your wonderful stories :)
A lovely chapter. Keep it up!
i loved your chapter ! and your comment too, because it was just the same for me this week : i couldn't writte a chapter as I had to really work at work : how stupid is that ? ;-)
| Title: Chapter 7
| 13 Oct 2007 11:04 am
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| Reviewer: Mango (Anonymous)
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Whoo! Snape is so cute. xD
| Title: Chapter 7
| 12 Oct 2007 9:28 am
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| Reviewer: Myrrdin (Anonymous)
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I can't wait for the next chapter. When I saw the 'To be continued...' I literally thought, 'Oh, no! Not another to be continued!' It was quite funny, really. I love this story. I loved the first, too, but I knew there was a sequel and couldn't wait to read it. Poor little Harry. -huggles him- And poor Sev; he sure has his hands full. Keep up the amazing job, dear!
~Myrrdin
hehe Harry Hugs!! great chapter. can't wait for the next. will harry get along with the twins? ooo exciting. hehe :D
| Title: Chapter 7
| 10 Oct 2007 2:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Jonathan (Anonymous)
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My apologies for not dropping by to read. I actually forgot about this site for a bit. Hehe. Great update. Please update soon. Thanks.
Best regards,
Jonathan
Great, great chapter! I loved how Severus talked with Harry and reassured him, and poor sweet little Harry--I just want to hug and hug him.
Molly and Severus' talk was very good, too, and I think it will be the right thing for Harry to be able to spend some time with the Weasleys and for Molly to watch him. Sounds like a good deal all around.
Looking forward to more!
| Title: Chapter 7
| 09 Oct 2007 5:45 pm
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| Reviewer: honore (Anonymous)
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Kind of hard for me to picture Molly and Arthur.... so many kids.....
Anyway, I knew I liked those Weaseys. Thanks
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