| Title: Chapter 2
| 13 Sep 2007 3:30 pm
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| Reviewer: eathsprite (Anonymous)
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wow! yay! *claps hands* can't wait for the next chapter, that was very good. I'm interested to see what goes on between snape and miss parkinson.... what is she up to? hehe, please update soon :)
OMG!! What a fantastic story!! This is definitely going on my favorites list!!
Umm... I'm sorry though, I just couldn't bring myself to read Whelp - there is a level of Harry Harm that I just can't get past, and the idea of Harry being treated like a DOG by those horrible Durleys pushed all my squick buttons!! I'm sure it's a really great story, and I hope I don't get too lost in this one because I didn't read it, but I just don't think I can!!
I'm like Harry though, I'm trusting Severus to keep him safe in this story, and since I love your other stories so much, I thought I'd take the chance, and it was soooo worth it!!
Looking forward to more!!
Scarlett
Awwwwwwwwwww! I didn't realize he'd been that badly affected by Filch's presence. Stupid git. I know he can't hardly get a job anywhere else, but for crying out loud, does he have to be so mean? I guess I'd be bitter too if I were him... But still...
I found it sweet that Sev took Harry with him to talk to his Snakes, and that Rose P. offered to baby sit sometime. Wait until she finds out what a horror that would be... Could you even imagine? Babysitting for SNAPE. Lol. I love it.
Great job!
Author's Response: Yeah, can you imagine his list of instructions for what Harry can and can't do, and who to "call" in case of emergency, etc.? Oh, wait . . . I guess I'll kinda have to imagine that list. ;-) Thanks for the review!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 12 Sep 2007 2:05 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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It's a pleasure to see you continuing this fantastic story line!!! I love Severus as a protective parent. That teaser about the Parkinson girl counters the plot line about Filch nicely. I'm very glad you continue to share your work with us!
Poor Harry will never be able to stand being around Filch. Excellent chapter and hopefully more soon!
Lovely, lovely!
"To compensate, Severus increased his scowl by a factor of ten, at minimum, and added extra menace to his voice."
Loved it!
Excellent chapter! Poor Harry, I just want to gather him up and rock him :( I wonder who will be the most distressed at the end of the day? I bet Snape can hardly stand being away.
*sigh* I just...love this. lol.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 11 Sep 2007 11:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Rhea (Signed)
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That story is very good! )))
| Title: Chapter 1
| 11 Sep 2007 6:47 am
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| Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous)
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I love this story just finished reading Whelp I... Great story line.
Update soon!
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