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Title: Chapter 24 26 Jul 2009 12:44 pm
Reviewer: jo (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I thoroughly enjoyed both Whelp and Whelp11. I thought you handled Harry's emotional state and fears very well.
    I have read JKR's books numerous times and felt that was the one thing lacking. Despite the suffering, abuse and lost Harry expereinced in his life he always seemed to be okay. We know that no one could go through what Harry experienced and not have some residual effect----------not in the real world anyway.
    Thank you for your interesting and sensitive stories.
    JO
Title: Chapter 24 13 May 2009 8:47 pm
Reviewer: klc061874 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    outstanding story and very creative.
Title: Chapter 24 08 Apr 2009 3:49 am
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it
Title: Chapter 24 20 Jan 2009 3:46 am
Reviewer: Ichigo Mirai (Signed) [Report This]
    this was really good!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I should be starting Book Three soon . . . once I'm done with Better Be Slytherin (which I have only 2 chapters left of, I think.)
Title: Chapter 24 28 Dec 2008 8:18 pm
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    I really love this story - all of your writing brings me so much pleasure - I just wish I knew how to find more authors like you, lol. But, alas, your stories are wonderful and enough to keep me properly satisfied chapter to chapter :D

    Author's Response: Thank you, Caramello.  It's readers like you who make the whole thing worthwhile.  :)
Title: Chapter 24 29 Nov 2008 3:11 am
Reviewer: GruenerWackelpudding (Anonymous) [Report This]
    aaaww so cute!
    I can allready see Harry being a teenager and not wanting hugs from Severus and Severus still seeing Harry as a little boy and wanting to hug and kiss him (like most people know from experience "It seems like yesterday when you where so small" because time seems to run faster the older you get)
Title: Chapter 24 29 Oct 2008 5:17 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    A brilliant conclusion and some nice leads for the next story, well done!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 24 18 Oct 2008 10:10 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the way you portray Severus - very possessive and very in character. Great job :D

    Author's Response: Thank you!  It was sometimes hard to keep him IC, what with him needing to be rather cuddly and protective with Harry occasionally.
Title: Chapter 24 18 Oct 2008 6:37 am
Reviewer: Doxie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful! I can't wait for more Whelp to appear in the coming months. Thanks for all of your time and effort in making such a satisfying story.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I got a great deal of enjoyment writing it, and it won't be too long before I start the next part.

Title: Chapter 24 18 Oct 2008 3:34 am
Reviewer: txn (Signed) [Report This]
    Please write more! I love this series.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll start part 3 soon, I promise.

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