Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 23 22 Sep 2008 9:23 am
Reviewer: Elle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    that was bloody brilliant! i love this series! ... ugh! sometimes i just want to push albus down a flight of stairs ... can't he just leave well enough alone and stop being so ... him

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  And yeah, Albus is kind of a jerk sometimes.  Or at least a bit myopic. :)
Title: Chapter 23 19 Sep 2008 7:42 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't believe after all that, Sirius might still get to see Harry. Great chapter and I hope you'll be able to finish this up soon! I'm certainly looking forward to reading the next story too!

    Author's Response: THanks!  If you have any druthers about who should be sought out in "The Search for . . ." episode of Whelp, please let me know.  I'm looking for ideas.  And Sirius . . . yeah, he's crazy and all, and Harry's not going to want to hang out with him or anything, but as for just seeing him, especially if his Dad's right there . . . maybe.
Title: Chapter 23 19 Sep 2008 2:36 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    This is great. Sirius should a lot of time in the hospital - that way, Severus won't be able to cut him into small potion pieces.

    And there is going to be a third part????! - you really spoil us, you know.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Yeah, I figure if I keep Sirius and Severus away from each other long enough, they'll cool down enough to be reason . . . nah, forget it.  They'll never be reasonable about each other.  But if they can both be reasonable about Harry, that'd be a start.  Of course they'll be a part three: "The Search for . . ." I haven't decided yet who will be the object there.  Could be Scabbers, dunno. :)
Title: Chapter 22 09 Sep 2008 6:58 pm
Reviewer: NaiveGhost (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update.
    Keep writing!
    ;-)
Title: Chapter 22 02 Sep 2008 5:14 am
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW you are doing awesome on this story i cant wait for you to write another chapter :) And i do hope you are feeling better :)

    Author's Response: Thank you-- for the review and the well wishes.
Title: Chapter 22 30 Aug 2008 4:47 am
Reviewer: skrwt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good rescue scene! Poor little Harry, peeing himself! So touching that Severus could heARr Harry's voice in his head. Wow, Sirius has really messed up big time here. I wonder what Severus ... and Albus... are going to do?? and what kind of treats Tree is going to get!

    Author's Response: Tree's gonna get some serious tuna treats!  And Sirius is going to get some serious help.  He's a bit broken, moreso than Harry is, right now.  Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely chapter! I'm so proud of Harry for being able to articulate how he was treated by the Dursleys. He is a courageous kid, and it also shows how much Severus has helped him, too.

    I loved that Severus was able to hear Harry calling him through their bond and that Dumbledore knew where to go. The reunion between Harry and Severus was wonderful and I'm just so glad that they are together again.

    Poor Sirius though. He did mean well, though he went about it all wrong, but how awful for him to have to hear about how Harry has been mistreated so terribly. Now he has to accept that Severus is actually very good for Harry and is his father...we'll see how he does with that, but maybe it will help him that Harry explained how good Severus has been to him.

    I'm sorry that this story is nearly done, but if you have another part planned, that's excellent news!

    Author's Response: Hi Kristeh!  Yes, I have a Part Three planned . . . well, planned maybe putting it too strongly.  I have it in mind, maybe?  I still haven't decided who they'll be "In Search Of" but it'll come to me, I betcha.  Maybe it'll be "In Seach of Peter."  You know, to clear Sirius' name.  Dunno.  But thank you for your review, and yes, Sirius has a lot to deal with now, but in some small way, it was . . . cathartic for Harry that this happened.
Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 8:24 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    That was great. I really don't want Sirius chopped into small pieces. Also, Peter needs to be found.

    But even if Sirius is proved innocent, they will be serving hot tea in hell before Severus lets him close to Harry.

    I so enjoy this.

    Author's Response:

    No hot tea in hell?  Hmm, what about Pomegranate lemonade?  (I have an original story set in Hell, where one of the characters (Adonis) is baking cookies and serving up Pomegranate lemonade . . . because it's funny.)  But I understand your point, and yes, it'll be a cold day, or at least, very chilly, before certain individuals are allowed near certain others.  But maybe Part three of the series (as I just mentioned above) will be "The Seach for Peter". 

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 3:36 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job on this chapter; I really like the way Sirius finally starts listening, and huzzah for Harry being told the whole story behind his 'adoption'. I can't wait to find out what happens to Sirius :D

    Author's Response: Sirius is going to be facing a full on Snape Wrath before the day is through.  He may even live through it.  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 22 28 Aug 2008 5:51 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay Harry is safe again! I'm glad he and Severus were reunited. I am curious to see what happens to Sirius next. Hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm working on Better Be Slytherin! first, but I should get back to Whelp soon.

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