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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Title: Chapter 24 18 Mar 2008 10:42 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Need I say more than 'I love it'?

    Author's Response: Thank you :)  I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Title: Chapter 24 18 Mar 2008 10:26 pm
Reviewer: Syllva (Signed) [Report This]
    That just made my day slightly happier. Thanks. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I'm glad this chapter was able to brighten up your day. ;)  Thanks for reading and leaving me some feedback!

Title: Chapter 24 18 Mar 2008 9:55 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, and I thought it was very sweet, the way Sev brushed his hand across Harry's scar and the way he tucked him in and made him wear the top to his pajamas too. my sister used to argue with her 12 year old over that, he always complained he was too hot and then he got sick one day . .. kids!

    Author's Response:

    LOL...I once babysat a thirteen year old who never EVER wore a top/t-shirt with his pajamas.  He hated wearing a besides his swim trunks, actually...  He'd fight the issue 'til he was blue in the face... 

    This was a bit of a fluffy chapter, but I'm glad you enjoyed it :)  I appreciate your review!  By the way, I'm sitting down in about five minutes to continue ploughing through some more of your story...

Title: Chapter 23 16 Mar 2008 10:14 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so glad this site is back up so I could read your wonderful update! All of your ideas for this story so far have been truly interesting and creative. I am really curious as to what the locket has to do with the Chamber of Secrets and Ginny's condition, and what happens next. PLEASE, please post again soon! I enjoy reading this story very much, your ideas are brilliant and so is the content.

    Author's Response: Thanks, Beth :)  I appreciate your thoughtful review.  Everything should unfold in the next few chapters.  There will be a scene from Snape's perspective in the next chapter that will, hopefully, start to mesh everything together ;)  And I'm glad the site's back up as well.  It's the only one where I don't have to go searching for everything, scratching my head for hours, because this one's so easily accessible.
Title: Chapter 23 16 Mar 2008 8:14 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    I really feel for Ginny. She is so confused and frightened and poor Harry wants so badly to help, but cannot make sense of any of it. Snape keeps getting new tiny bits of the big picture, but not enough to know yet just what is going on. I cannot wait to see how you'll weave all of this together!
    Tracy

    Author's Response:

    Hi Tracy :)

    I really hope that when I finally weave everything together, I don't leave out a thread or two...LOL.  I think I'll need an Alpha reader for the last couple of chapters just to make sure everything comes together smoothly.  I'll be a bit nervous. ;)  Anyway, Thanks for all of your great reviews for my most recent chapters!  I love the fact that you're still reading and enjoying my story.  You were one of the authors that insipred me to begin my own story.  So thank you for that :) 

Title: Chapter 22 16 Mar 2008 7:57 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Again, I love how Harry cannot help but act like a child (he's only 12 after all!) and yet, want to be taken as seriously as any adult would be. Snape is about at his wit's end with the boy, and yet, is giving him a chance to speak his mind.
    I'll be sad when this one is over!
    Tracy
Title: Chapter 21 16 Mar 2008 7:42 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Jade,
    I loved how you wrote Hermione. And again, you and your wonderful little details make the story so much more intense, like Harry moving his cold toes further under where he was sitting to get warm. Harry is such a wonderful and conflicted character, he'd like to just be a kid, but at the same time, doesn't much like being treated as just another student by Snape.
    Great chapter hon!
    Tracy
Title: Chapter 23 16 Mar 2008 7:07 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh Poor Harry. LOL Escorted to bed by Snape. Hee hee. I love it though.

    Lines I love: "The warm flames licked at Harry's cheeks as he blinked rapidly at Snape through the green haze." Sheesh, could you have any more descriptive imagery in one sentence? :o)

    "studying the lines that rutted the man's features." Genius. It just really makes Snape seem all the more weary.

    I loved that bit as well with the two of them in the corridor. Snape really is letting his guard down, though of course he's not meaning to. I love Harry being able to get a peek into old Snape.

    Great as usual. Can't wait for what happens in the Tower. :o)

    Author's Response:

    Oh, thanks for the wonderful review, Tabitha :)  Just so you know, I may change my mind and work on the next chapter of SfS a bit sooner than I had originally planned.  I have ideas for the next chapter flickering around in my head, and I need to get them down before I lose them. LOL.  I feel like I've got a handle on this story now, and the next chapter is cemented in my mind.  So perhaps it can wait... 

    No other word besides 'rutted' seemed to describe what I was trying to portray about Snape's features.  I'm so, so, so happy to know that that particular line stood out to you, indicating Snape's weariness.  I rarely feel like I'm doing something right, so I suppose this is one of those moments when I can 'breathe easy'.  ;)  I could hug you for pointing that out to me.  Seriously. 

    The next chapter will begin in the Tower and shift over to Snape's perspective in another setting.  I believe it's high-time we figure out just what's going on in that man's head.  I hope it goes all right.  Writing Snape is nerve-wracking...LOL. 

    Well, once again, thank you for being so awesome and cheering me up with your lovely words of encouragement :)  I hope you're weekend went all right.

Title: Chapter 23 16 Mar 2008 12:18 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    That was really good! I loved this chapter. Very well written. Harry and Ginny stammering half answers, Snape's defeated posture, it was all wonderfully written!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  It's really lovely to see that you're still reading :)  I appreciate your feedback and your letting me know that you're still enjoying. 
Title: Chapter 23 15 Mar 2008 11:12 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the way harry and Ginny interacted, it was so sweet! And the locket is really creepy. I'm happy harry decided to share his findings with Snape, i always felt they should have gone to an adult for help in the books instead of trying to solve everything on their own.

    Hooray that the site is back up and I can finally post again! I used the time it was down to write though!

    Update soon!

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Writing Ginny so vulnerable and confused actually was creepy for me...lol.  Odd how my mind spins these eerie situations...  And I definitely agree about asking for help.  That whole concept was emphasized by countless people in Harry's life, and in the end, he finally accepts it from Ron and Hermione.  But I suppose I'm exploring the effects of asking for help a bit early on for Harry. ;)  Would have saved him a lot of grief...

    Well, thanks for the review!  I spent some time this past week writing as well ;)


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