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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, I still have about 3-5 chapters left...(approximately) so this story won't end too soon. I AM very flattered that you are enjoying my story enough to savor it :) Thanks for the lovely compliment!
This was great, although it is rather worrisome that one of the portkeys is missing. Severus does not appear to me to be someone who would misplace something. Author's Response: Thank you! And no, Severus doesn't misplace things...usually. I mean, he's not perfect, but he probably thinks he is...lol. Glad you enjoyed this chapter and thanks again for letting me know!
I enjoy reading this story very much, it is incredably well writen, you have a real tallent for it. Everyone's emotions are writen so well, you can feel them youself as you read, at least I can. You have very good ideas and keep everyone well in character. I really like how you change from Snape to Harry because I like both of their points of veiw. PLEASE post again soon! It was awsome for you to have updated so soon, but I'd like another chapter anyway ^_^ I love this story, it's one of my favorites, as I've undouptably said before. Author's Response: A Snape-shaped cookie! I should try to make some of those... I did make a Harry Potter shaped cookie when decorating them for Chrismtas. lol. Well, I for one have to say that I'm very pleased that you are enjoying my story, and I'm so glad you're back online! It seems as if a lot of people have up and left :( Probably very busy with real life...the real life that I tend to ignore...lol. Also, I'm flattered that you think my ideas are good, because sometimes I feel like my plot isn't the most interesting. I switched points of view in this one because we're getting down to the end, and I think it's important for the readers to understand how the two are changing in their views of each other. I didn't want to drag on and on, but a little insight now and again is good :) Thanks very much for taking the time to leave me a review! A new chapter should be up soon ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! By the way, I do believe you might just earn yourself featured-story status, which you completely deserve...look at all of those first-rate chapters you've been able to chug out! And yes, you're completely right about Snape. No, he's not changing his beliefs on discipline, but he's slowly changing the way he approaches it. It's not necessary to be stern all of the time. Of course, Snape's had his small moments of kindness throughout, but if he really wants to do anything good for Harry, he needs to realize that Harry is an adolescent that needs reassurance and support, rather than just a wagging finger in his face all of the time... Again, I really appreciate your review. I'm still in awe of your ability to write so quickly and still have the time to read and leave feedback! You must have some sort of superpower that I wish I had... lol ;)
So, this story is doing REALLY well, it is so emotional and entertaining, intresting and eventful. Glad Ginny is helped. I can understand Ron's upset-ness, but that was unfair to poor Harry, gald he appologized. I think your blurp of Draco in chap 17 was fine, it wasn't a huge scene so I was absolutly fine with it. If Draco is not a main character that's good in my book, but I don't mind blurps. I'M SO SAD THE STORY IS COMMING TO AN END! PLEASE post a sequel after you finnish? And please post again soon! I love reading this story. Author's Response: LOL...it's quite all right. Everyone is busy, it seems. And I understand. I do appreciate you taking the time to leave me a review, however. So thank you :) This story has a several chapters to go, but I wanted to give everyone a 'heads up' that it is beginning to wind down. When I'm reading a story I love and am hit with a 'final chapter' notice at the last second, it's like being submerged in cold water...lol. Quite a shock. I didn't want to do that to everyone. As for a sequel, I'm wracking my brain...I promise. I suppose I'll have to see if enough people are interested in one before I chug forward with one, but just know that I'm keeping it in mind. Oh, and I'm really glad that you enjoyed the scene with Draco. ;) Thanks so much for the review, Beth!
I've been reading previous chapters in this story, and I've got to say you have done a fantastic job with continuity. You've development the characters, taking your time and paying close attention to dialogue and emotions. Nowhere did I think your rushed or cheated us out of a good scene. Write more. Author's Response: I suppose I've updated quickly lately, because I have no life at the moment. lol. I live with my sister right now while I'm working in Indianapolis, and it drives her crazy when I baricade myself in my room and just type away. She says I'm boring. Ha. Anyway, I think it's interesting that you've been reading previous chapters of this story, considering that I've reread your stories about twelve times each since you've posted them...lol. I randomly read chapters of ATAPTG when I can't sleep, and THWTF is just all-around entertaining... Obsessed much? *Sigh* Anyway, you know how much I appreciate your reviews :) Thanks for sticking with this story!
Predictions, hmm? I can definitely see the fractionally more mellow Snape caving to Harry’s request and taking them up to the hospital wing but that sort of seems too easy. Maybe on the way down Harry hears the voice and can’t help but investigate. The book maybe in good hands but the ‘voice’ is still at large. How’d I do? Author's Response: Yes, Severus decided to use the closest office (Lockhart's) to get Ginny to the infirmary as fast as he could. Since the DADA office is the only one on the second floor, that's the one he had to use ;) I've been studying up on my rooms and floors of Hogwarts, I guess...lol. And yay, I loved the predictions! You may be right about mellow!Snape, but for the rest, I suppose I'll just have to update soon ;) Thanks so much for letting me know that you're still enjoying the story!
I am wondering what is going to happen to the basil (errr, big snake - librarians can't spell). I hate to see this end. Will there be a sequel??? Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know that you are reading and enjoying my story! Yes, Ron is pretty hard to take sometimes, and I think that's mainly because he doesn't really know how to express his emotions without flying off the handle. Basilisk is a funny word that took me forever to memorize, so don't feel bad...lol. ;) Perhaps if there is enough interest for a sequel, I'll think about it. I just don't have any ideas at the moment... Again, thank you for the review!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's interesting to compare Harry's and Snape's relationship from the first few chapters up to now. It's pretty gradual, and I didn't realize it until I went back and reread... ;) I'm so, so flattered that you enjoy my story so much! I'll update as soon as I can :) Thanks again!
Author's Response: OH, I'm so glad you gave my story a chance! Thank you so much for letting me know that you're enjoying it :) I really do appreciate it! I'm about halfway through the next chapter, so it should be posted soon! |
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