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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm also partial to Harry and Snape. I'm glad you like the characterization in this story. I do work the hardest on that, I believe. I'll try to hurry with the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm working on it ;) I think what I'm planning on doing will get the job done but not focus heavily on Draco and Sev. But you're right: He doesn't let them get away with anything it seems--at least not behind the scenes, as Harry has found out. Thanks for reading and leaving a review!
Author's Response: LOL. Draco is such a little slimeball. Harry most likely feels like he's getting trampled on right about now. He's wrong, of course. But we can't help but feel sorry for him. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: I know, Harry's quite pitiful in this chapter, isn't he? I haven't been very nice to him. lol. I suppose I figured, like me, that some people would want to see Draco get his; however, I may just make it a brief reference scene. Harry/Snape interaction is my favorite, after all ;) Thanks so much for the review!
I think a Severus/Draco interaction would add to the story. Author's Response: Thank you! It was meant to be fast-paced. I don't really like dragging out scenes--well, certain ones--and this was one of those kind. I'm still trying to decide about the Draco scene. I've had more No's than Yes's, actually. Again, I appreciate your review!
Yeah, okay please DO type quickly. I know I've reviewed this on ff.net already, but I couldn't resist reviewing again. First, let me say, you write Hermione and Ron extremely well. Their bantering is perfect, and I could just picture Ron with his sarcastic comments, WHILE he's eating. hehe. Also, you write Snape extremely well too. He is very in-character and at the same time, has that bit of fanfiction niceness to him. A lot of authors spend so much time trying to keep Snape IN-character that they forget that this is fanfiction. Characters don't have to be incharacter all the time. That'd be boring. So thanks for giving Snape just that bit of un-Snapeyness that makes me want to keep reading. I love your Harry. He's so...great. No other words to describe him. And every time you say something about his eyes, I can just see them, glittering back at me. Wow. You're great. I love the banner you have at the story heading. Did you do it? It's beautiful, and captures the story just right. So, this is probably the longest review I have ever written, and will ever write, so I'll be quiet now. But I'd just like to say, this is one of the best Harry/Snape stories I have ever read, and that you are one of the most talented writers I know. Thank you so much. -Elise Author's Response: I love the fact that you reviewed twice. You really know how to make a girl's day. :) By the way, you pretty much have one of the coolest pennames ever on ff.net. Well, first of all, I'm working on the new chapter tonight, and that means that I'll probably have it up tomorrow or Friday. Usually when I begin writing, I can't stop until I'm finished with the chapter, which, let's be honest, isn't good for my health, but oh well. lol. Ron and Hermione are so fun to write. I try to really bring out Ron's sarcastic side that J.K.R wrote so well. One of my favorite quotes in the whole series is in PoA after the boggart scene when Ron says something like, "What's your biggest fear, Hermione? An assignment that only got a 9 out of 10?" I crack up everytime I read that, because it is SO along the lines of my own sarcastic humor. You're right about Snape. I do try to keep him in character, and, obviously, he's going to be slightly out of character since it's a mentoring story; however, I try to do in a Snape-ish way. It's actually impossible to keep Snape completely in character, because then what would be the point of writing a fanfic? OH! And SiriuslyMental made my banner for me! I've tried to figure out how to credit her for it, but I'm unable to type anything underneath the picture. She's amazing, isn't she? Thanks so much Elise for the fabulous review. I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story. I promise it'll be updated soon ;)
Harry was like a wet puppy in this chap, I guees snape admonishment will put him on a halt for a little while...or not, who knows, harry is harry after all jeje Keep writing
There! a chocolate frog for him :)
I think that subconsciously Harry wanted to know just how annoying and defiant he could get before Snape reacts in some way... I find so fitting, the fact that Snape didn`t drop harry`s fingers until he has stop squirming ; It was something like, "I`ll not let you defy my authority". I guess they are just setting some boundaries. Forgive my english; and keep writing ;)
Keep it up ;o) Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you like it :) It definitely makes my day to learn of readers who have recentely found the story, wade through a whole 15 chapters, and still enjoy the story. lol. I'll be updating this one soon, after I finish the next chapter to my Sirius/Harry story. Thanks again! |
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