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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
I love the way he is stern and hardcore, but at the same time most concerned with the safety and well-being of Harry and the students, even if they aren't his Slytherins. Well done! Hope we don't have to wait TOO long for the next brilliant chapter :) Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really happy that you like my version of Snape, because I try to keep him in character as much as possible. I think that deep down, Severus really did care about more of his students than he let on, even though J.K.R. made it pretty clear that he wasn't a very good person. I just don't think he was given the chance. You should check out Malora's story 'Never Say Remember' for a good contrast between the Snape we know and the Snape that could have been. It's brilliant. Anyway, I promise I'll work quickly on the next chapter. All of these reviews are very encouraging and keep my fingers a-flyin' on the keyboard. lol. Thanks again for the kind review :)
I have to work a little backward this time and say I cannot *wait* to read about Draco and Harry's ... um, confrontation. You mentioned typing quick, please do :D. Those two are going to learn eventually I suppose but wow looks like it's going to be a while. The note during potions had me groaning at first. I had my eyes half closed hoping Snape wouldn't find out. You had me fooled I thought Harry had hidden it and then the hand slipped the note away and that was too cool. I found myself very proud of a certain potions professor. When you mentioned in the end notes "from Snape's perspective" do you mean the whole classroom scene, because that would be pretty neat. On a very differnt line the confession to Harry's friends was too cute. I felt for Harry having to admit what happened. With Ron's temper and loose tongue I wonder how long before he tries to tell Snape off. Thank you for the new chapter. Author's Response: Hi! And I'm so sorry you had a bad day yesterday :( I sort of had a blah kind of day yesterday too. But I'm really, really glad that reading this story cheered you up. You have no idea how much that means to me. The confrontation was something I wanted to keep vague on purpose, since I want to keep this story in only Harry's and Snape's perspective. However, what went down during that heart-to-heart moment will certainly be implied in the next chapter. And by Snape's perspective, I just mean that I'll begin the chapter in Snape's point-of-view, in regard to the discussion with Dumbledore. Writing interaction within the trio is quite fun actually. I also know that the whole "Ron-is-mad-and-bitter" thing has been done a hundred times, and frankly, I can't stand it. lol. So I decided to put a different twist on it. Again, I'm so glad you liked this chapter. Thank YOU for your review! As for typing quickly, I am going to begin working on a new chapter of my other story first and then I'll start on the next chapter of this one. It's all planned out. I just wish the words would jump from my brain to the computer screen. hahaha.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for leaving me a review at both places! :) I always like to throw some good trio interaction in there. I'm glad you liked it. Malfoy is such a little slimeball. lol. For awhile I was a bit of a Draco fan, and then something just clicked, and I didn't really care for him much anymore. It was odd. As for the hallway scene between Snape and Draco, we won't exactly what was said but it will be implied in the next chapter. If that makes sense... True, I am back at work, with a lot of new students. For some reason, the school I work at is adamant about having the kids change teachers after the first semester...more like college, I suppose. But anyway, the kids are eerily quiet, and I sort of miss my louder, slightly crazy 6th period class from last semester. I guess this is where I sigh. :) Anyway, sorry for the rambling. I just appreciate your encouragment SO very much :) Thanks again.
cant' wait for chap 16 ;) b29;loves your storyb29; xD Author's Response: Yeah, Malfoy's a coward, isn't he? But hey, I'm really glad you're liking the story! Chapter 16 should be up soon :) Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: lol...Your review made me smile. I'll update this one as soon as I can; I promise. Sometimes I feel as if I'm lacking a bit on the action part of stories, so I'm very glad you thought the end was action-filled :) And I really think Malfoy deserves a good butt-kicking, personally. Whatever Harry does in the next chapter will be significant, though. I promise. Thanks so much for the feedback!
Author's Response: Thanks for the enthusiastic review! I'm really getting bad with these cliffhangers. Sorry. lol. But I'm glad you're looking forward to the next chapter ;)
I have a love/hate relationship with cliffies. Right now I hate them. This was an excellent chapter, as always. I really loved how Snape stood up for Harry after reading the note. Even if Harry isn't very appreciative at the moment. And I can't wait to see Snape POV next in regaurds to the dairy and such. This is an awesomely, amazing story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon. Author's Response: Eeek. Sorry. lol. Harry has a bad habit of being appreciative after the fact, but I suppose that's how all of us are at one time or another. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked this chapter. It was one of those 'iffy' ones where I'm really unsure about it before I post, so hearing that you liked it is very encouraging. I'll update this one soon. I'm kind of doing this alternating thing in regard to updating, but after the new chapter of Staring from Scratch is up, I'll get to work on the new chapter of this one! Thanks again!
Author's Response: Hi Eva :) Thanks very much for leaving me some feedback. I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter, and yeah...sorry for the cliff-hanger. I'll update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I've really tried to keep everyone in character as much as possible, and I try to keep it consistent. Glad you're enjoying this :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the thoughtful review and kind words :) I'm really glad that you like this story so much! I should have a new chapter up soon, as I've got the next one planned out and will begin working on it tomorrow. Again, thank you. It's always great to get such positive feedback :) |
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