Skittles!
I like this story a lot. Harry's in trouble. I am not sure what his problem is, I would like to live with Snape.
| Title: Speaking but not Listening
| 19 Nov 2007 11:36 pm
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| Reviewer: em_conway (Anonymous)
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ohhhhhhh this looks sooooooo good...where is the rest?
| Title: Speaking but not Listening
| 11 Nov 2007 4:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Ayana (Anonymous)
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I'm not sure if I reweied before...but well anyway nice story, please update soon!
that was really good and i hope that u continue really soon.
| Title: The truth in pen and ink
| 20 Oct 2007 4:46 am
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| Reviewer: Mamoray (Anonymous)
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It was really good. I LOVE the relationship shown between Harry and Dumbles!!!Also, I like how Severus is portrayed I see it as quite unique and subtle within his shift in character. Now, please please please update soon!
| Title: Speaking but not Listening
| 15 Oct 2007 3:02 am
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| Reviewer: Moongrl (Signed)
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I really like this so far. I can actually see this as a type of mind frame Harry would be in, that and you are still managing to keep in character with Severus while having him show compassion, really thats tough to do.
| Title: Speaking but not Listening
| 14 Oct 2007 12:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Alex (Anonymous)
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I really like this story so far. I hope you continue it!
| Title: Speaking but not Listening
| 12 Oct 2007 12:08 am
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| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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Another great chapter! It's nice to see Severus being so protective of Harry, and he's right---it's time someone did look out for him and try to protect him.
Still, I can't blame Harry for not wanting to be Severus' responsibility---he probably imagines it being worse than the Dursleys. Hopefully, Severus can convince him otherwise!
| Title: The truth in pen and ink
| 12 Oct 2007 12:04 am
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| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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This is a great beginning! Harry's pain is obvious, and I feel really bad for him.
I liked Snape's comments about Slytherin being the House for needy children, and it implies that he would have done something for Harry sooner. I'm curious to see what he has in mind.
| Title: Speaking but not Listening
| 11 Oct 2007 2:41 am
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| Reviewer: Lady Galenda (Anonymous)
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Please continue, this is well thought out so far. Hope you also develope the back story of why Severus is looking into Harry's life.
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