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Title: Chapter 18 11 May 2008 7:05 am
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    Ever since DH, I've seen mentor stories as roads not taken. :) You're doing an excellent job with this, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'll try to update again soon!

Title: Chapter 18 11 May 2008 6:44 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter!!

    Author's Response: Thanks!! :)
Title: Chapter 18 11 May 2008 6:33 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked how you have Harry and Blaise being friends with each other and Harry nearly hexing Malfoy even though it was a bluff. And the twins were hilarious as usual. Loved the end and how Sev is going to find a picture of Lily to give Harry. Aww!

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 18 11 May 2008 6:27 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. That was funny that Harry drew his wand on Draco without knowing any hexes. Pretty Slytherin!!

    I'm glad the Weasley twins are befriending Harry although they probably will get him into mischief pretty soon.

    Author's Response: I adore the Weasley twins and just had to include them! And with Harry being the son of a Marauder, how could he not get into mischief? :)
Title: Chapter 18 11 May 2008 6:05 am
Reviewer: PadyandMoony (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. The confrontation with Draco was quite in character and this turn with McGonagal is very interesting.

    Author's Response:

    Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks again for reviewing! :)

Title: Chapter 18 11 May 2008 5:51 am
Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was another great addition. I found it heartwrenching that Harry didn't even know his mother's hair color. Perfection.

    Author's Response: With Vernon and Petunia as his first guardians, what can you expect? Petunia certainly never talked about her sister. Glad you liked it and thanks for another review! :)
Title: Chapter 17 09 May 2008 2:23 am
Reviewer: JessieG (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have just finished reading all your stories on this site and your writing skills have improved drastically since your first one. I am really enjoying this story, so please update soon.

    Oh and if an idea on how to punish the Dursleys pops into my head I will be sure to post it.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you like this so far and next chapter will be up shortly!

Title: Chapter 17 06 May 2008 2:26 am
Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm a long time reader here, but this is the first time I've reviewed with my new penname. (I've actually been reading/reviewing since the very first chapter.) I've gotta say it, right now, this is my favorite WIP out there. That's a big compliment from me, as I read dozens of stories from dozens of websites. I actually come on this site daily just to see if you have updated.

    You have such a strong voice and a unique concept. You've managed to combine all of the cliched ideas (abusive!Dursley, adopted!Harry, Snape/Harry friendship before school starts, etc) and make them into something unique. You've made Harry into such a unique boy, and it truly makes your story stand out among the crowd. I don't really have any ideas for the Durley's punishment, though I think life in Azkaban is no better than they deserve (if Harry was going to testify.) One thing I wanted to add is that, yes Harry does have a nice family now (excluding Connor). However, the effects of abuse run deep, and I feel that even excluding the current Connor issues, what the Dursleys did to him should not be forgotten. Also, I just want to say right now, I am dying to see Cathy's reaction when she finds out how awful Connor is to Harry. (And I do so hope that her reaction involves calling a divorce lawyer.) I also saw something on your personal webpage for this story where you mentioned Cathy and Snape being a couple possibly, and I have to say, I approve. It'd be a great gradual addition to the story if you decide to include it.

    This is officially the most detailed review I have ever given, and trust me I could go on. Though, I'm going to sum it up with a Good job, and please update soon. :)

    Author's Response: I feel honored that this is your fav WIP! It makes me really happy to know that other people enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoy writing it. I tried really hard to make this fic somewhat unqiue and I'm glad you think it does stand out compared to others. I've got so many ideas coming up for the scene that everyone has been waiting for- the one where they all find out how Connor really is. Thank you for taking the time to leave a wonderful review! I will admit that you're review made me jump back on the writing table and I'm currently taking a little break from my next chapter- which I'm trying to get out this weekend. I will try to get this next one off to my beta within a day or two so be on the lookout for updates this weekend! Thanks again for the awesome and inspiring rewiew! :)
Title: Chapter 7 04 May 2008 3:34 am
Reviewer: Myene (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i feel compelled to piont out that ASL (american sign langue) and BSL (british sign langue) are *very* diffrent. unlike spoken english they are not related.

    Author's Response:

    I figured they weren't exactly similar, but I took a chance anyway. If you know of a reference site where I can research it, that would be helpful. Thanks for pointing it out anyway!

Title: Chapter 17 04 May 2008 2:13 am
Reviewer: Naomi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww... Cliffhanger! Why did ya do that!? Please keep writing, I'm gonna lose sleep over this cliffhanger! =]

    I love this story wholeheartedly! ^^

    Author's Response:

    I hope you didn't loose too much sleep! Next chapter is coming up in just a bit!


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