Excellant chapter, so glad you updated!
I'm truly happy you had the twins make an appearance, they are awesome! I'm also glad you decided to keep Harry's rivalry with Draco. Susan would make a good friend, nice choice, and I like your take on Zabini, he sounds like a funny kid ^^.
As for the Dursleys; yes, a hex is a bit overdone. Perhaps they can have a bunch of 'freaky' things happen to their house, thus the neighborhood will think them abnormal. The exact opposite of what they wanted, mwahahahaha! *cough cough* lol.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: The twins are too funny and intersting so I just had to add them in! As for Blaise, I'm hoping to venture out of my usual writing comfort and make an interesting character that is different that's funny and slightly sarcastic at times. Thanks for the wonderful review and I'll try to update again soon!
Yay! You updated too! And I loved this chapter! What did Sev do to the Dursleys?? Will we ever know? I loved the buzzer thing, my nephew had one and used it on everyone, nearly gave my mom heart failure! LOL. I like how you have Harry make friends with the twins & stick up for Severus too! And he's a Slytherin too, which is where he belongs!
Author's Response: Well, I dont exactly know what Sev did to them! I couldn't come up with something unique to do to them so I left that scene out for right now. I'm hoping to mention exactly what happened in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 16
| 23 Apr 2008 3:46 pm
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| Reviewer: dreameater (Anonymous)
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is connor leaving anytime soon? i have this really impulsive urge to castrate that sneaky two-faced *^%#&$(@&&$ lol... update soon please! :D
Author's Response: For some reason, many seem to feel that way. I wonder why...? Dont worry though, he'll be gone soon!
| Title: Chapter 16
| 04 Apr 2008 9:57 am
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| Reviewer: Johnnyonthespot (Anonymous)
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I love this fic, but, can Connor please get his ass kicked?
:D
Author's Response: He will, that's for sure! :)
I read your whole story tonight. Very nice. I'm intrigued with your fairly "nice" Severus, sad about Harry's bad luck with uncles and stepfathers, and wondering what problems will confront Harry once he gets to Hogwarts.
Author's Response: Yeah Harry's got some bad luck but all will get better for him soon. Thanks for the review!
I loved the chapter, it was so fun....Great job, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it and the next one is now up! :)
| Title: Chapter 16
| 30 Mar 2008 10:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!! I just had a thought, do you plan on having Harry's mom dump her husband and marry Sev. That'd be cool!!!!!!!!!! And Sev would be a better dad than the other guy.
Thanks for writing the chapter!!
Author's Response: Well Connor will be gone sooner or later and Sev may or may not enter the family. That's still up for debate. Thanks for the review!
Very good chapter! I enjoyed in a lot, keep up the great work! Sevy was brilliant, :)
I'm glad that Harry still got Hedwig, :D that was nice.
I can't wait for more!!
Scorpia
Author's Response: I can't resist letting Harry have Hedwig since she was a great pet for him. Thanks for the review and the next chapter is up!
Great chapter. Loved Harry and the Goblins and how everyone thought he was Snape's son.
Author's Response: I thought it would be amusing for a rumor to spread around about Sev having a family. Thanks for reviewing!
You did a really great job with describing everything and the trip was very interesting and enjoyable to read. I think it is funny and kind of cute that people think Harry is Severus's son. I think that Cathy is a very good OC, she isn't a mary-sue, so if you wanted them to slowly develop a relationship I'd be just fine with it. It was very sweet of Severus to get Harry Hedwig, I'm happy he did so. I can't wait for Harry to go to Hogwarts, and to find out what happened to those dastardly Dursleys. Harry is truly happy right now, I'm glad he could get away on this trip with Cathy and Severus, it was loads of fun to read! I am absolutely thrilled you updated, that I read this chapter at 3:00 in the morning! PLEASE post again as soon as you can, I LOVE reading this story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful long review! It took me a while to post but the next chapter is finally up and I hope you enjoy it! :)
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