The car crash was unexpected, I was like WOW! Lol, I liked Conner for about six sentences but then He wasn't very nice to Harry. So now I hope Snape, Nick, Devil, someone like that get's a hold on him, lol. Catherine had better say "NO!" Lol, Don't do it Catherine! He's a fake!!
Great chapter, very satifying.
Scorpia
Author's Response: I do try to add in something unexpected once and a while! :)
I screamed out loud and almost scared my cat to death when I read the first mention of the Dursleys. LOl, I loved Nick's reaction to Harry's abilty. It was a great chapter. I want to go ride a roller coaster now! Lol, :-)
Scorpia
Author's Response: When I wrote that, I too wanted to go on a roller coaster ride! :)
YAY! Acidental magic is so fun! Great chappie! I can't wait to see what Nick will discover! You Rock Alexis!
Author's Response: You know, I almost forgot to add in some accidental magic! Thanks so much for all the reviews!
I like the job you chose for Catherine. She seems like the patient, kind type that would have that kind of job. I don't think you over did Severus, he was very in character, sarcastic, smart, sunny...ok, maybe not sunny! Lol, :)
Scorpia
Author's Response: Snape sunny? Hmm I cant see a yellow sunny Snape but maybe if it was a black sun, it would better suit his taste? :p
I think that you are doing Harry very well! Nick's atttitude made me kind a wary, but I guess it's understadable since he was in the army. I can't wait for Snape!!
Loved this chapter!
Scorpia
Author's Response: Nick will have a good influence on Harry, despite his stern manner. I'm glad you like this and thanks again for reviewing!
It's funny that you mentioned the house in your story & AN, because my mom & dad have always gone on sbout how they want a white brick house. I just thought that was funny. I was kind of surrised that Catherine adopted Harry so quickly, I thought for sure that she would of talked to him for severall more days before doing something so major. But I am glad that she adopted him! :)
Scorpia
Author's Response: I'll admit the whole adoption process was kinda skimmed over and happened pretty quickly. At some point, I hope to go back and add more details and such about all of that. But hey, who can resist those innocent little green eyes looking up at you?
(Smile) Has Harry finally found somebody that will love him? (cheers) :) I sure hope so! Catherins seems really nice. It would be cool if she married Sev later wouldn't it? (Sigh) But, that's just my thoughts. I thought this was a great chapter. (Whispers)Don't tell anyone but I almost cried when Harry met Catherine!
Great chapter!
Scorpia
Author's Response: Wow! So many people have suggested that Snape and Catherine hook up! Even I am starting to consider it...
I like it when Harry meets strangers, or at least the ones who are nice to him. I don't see it a lot in the fics I have read. I can't wait to read more! :)
Scorpia
Author's Response: I'm glad you like this so far and I hope you continue to do so! :)
Poor Harry, he can't even hum in peace! Hopefully when Snape comes along he will give him a hug. :) But--that probley won't happen if I know Snape.
You had me scared when Harry's aunt tried to wake him and he wouldn't wake, (Anything important about that by the way?) If Harry had gone into a coma or something I would of screamed! Vernon is getting rid of Harry, the poor dear. I'm going to R&R the next chapter now!
Scorpia
Author's Response: The reason Harry wouldn't wake was because he had used magic by messing around with his hair color. Everytime he tries something new, such as changing hair color, style, ect., he will be tired after doing it until he has done it enough times that it occurs without much effort. Thanks for another review!
The famous Harry Potter haircut! I can't wait to read about Petunyah's expression, lol. I loved the length of your first chapter. Not to long not to short. Very well written! I love that Harry's teacher is worried about him? Will she be the one to adopt Harry? I'm sad to say that I've never seen this story before now. It looks promising and I've only read the first chapter!
Scorpia
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the first chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
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