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Title: Chapter 8 29 Jan 2008 9:51 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that was a great chapter! I'm so happy to see Harry settling in and feeling more comfortable. I loved that he's able to call Nick and Cathy his grandfather and mum now. Sounds like he still has some insecurities though, especially about his magic...that's going to be an interesting conversation!

    Author's Response: That conversation will be coming up in chapter 15, which I am currently writing. It should be an interesting discovery for Cathy! Thanks for another review!
Title: Chapter 7 29 Jan 2008 9:18 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Nick seems like he'll be really good for Harry...I was happy to see that Harry seems more relaxed with him.

    It's good that Harry and Cathy managed to get through the haircut business without a real problem. Harry was nervous of course, but he came through just fine.

    And we glimpsed Snape!

    Author's Response:

    Snape was (sadly) only glimpsed in this chapter and it's still a few more before he comes back. I kinda got carried away with Harry and his new family but he is most certainly in the later chapters a lot more. :)

Title: Chapter 13 29 Jan 2008 7:59 pm
Reviewer: Jonathan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good question. I would like to see Harry become friends with Snape - Even after he entered Hogwarts and Snape finds out who he is. I have no objections to Blaise Zabini being a girl since I don't know whether Blaise is a boy or girl. Thanks for the update and please continue the story.

    Best regards,
    Jon

    Author's Response: Snape will of course, be a bit ticked after finding out just who Harry is but he'll get over and they will remain friends. Thanks for reviewing and the newest chapter is finally up!
Title: Chapter 13 29 Jan 2008 2:35 pm
Reviewer: Wolverine (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your story. I can't wait for the next chapter. I really don't mind if Blaise is a boy or a girl.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion and I hope you enjoy the newest chapter!
Title: Chapter 13 29 Jan 2008 4:10 am
Reviewer: Kristi Parrish (Signed) [Report This]
    It was a good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 13 29 Jan 2008 1:57 am
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    As far as I'm concerned, Blaise is okay as either. Good part and I look forward to the next update.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion and I hope you enjoy the newest chapter!
Title: Chapter 13 29 Jan 2008 1:04 am
Reviewer: Vintage (Signed) [Report This]
    um... I'd like him to still remain friends with Ron and Hermione even if they're not very close because I'm not a fan of making Ron or Hermione detestable characters. I'd like him to be friends with Draco too. If you make Blaise a girl(which I won't mind at all) and you get her involved with Harry, then if you would make this Draco/Ginny(if it ever gets that far) that would be very nice.

    I love your tale, and I love the way you're making a budding relationship between Harry and Snape. Great Job!! Thank you!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your opinions on the characters. I still haven't decided what all I want to do. I'm glad you are enjoying this and thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 13 29 Jan 2008 12:30 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story. As for friends, Hermione is always a plus, Blaise (boy or girl) would be interesting. Also Draco would be good, if you can make it believable. Maybe Theo Nott could become Harry's school enemy. Though I'd enjoy this story no matter who becomes friends or enemies. Thanx for the chapter, can't wait for more.

    Author's Response: I don't know if I can make a believable Draco so chances are slim for him. He'll probably be a neutral character for now. Thanks for taking the time to review!
Title: Chapter 13 29 Jan 2008 12:09 am
Reviewer: lisas_castle (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm... I'm not really sure who I'd like to see him be friends with. I've always pictured Blaise as a boy, but I've also seen him (er you know what I mean) as a girl in stories too, so whichever works better for your story!

    Will we see more of Nick anytime soon? I love watching him and Harry interact, I think he's a great influence!

    And now my normal plea... update soon!!

    Author's Response:

    I know Nick hasn't been around much but he should make an appearance in the chapter that I am currently working on. Thanks for reviewing and I hope you enjoy the newest chapter!

Title: Chapter 13 28 Jan 2008 11:59 pm
Reviewer: PadyandMoony (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm awaiting eagerly for Snape to hex Connor though.
    About Blaise, I have to confess I don't like when author's make him a girl because it gets confusing. I'm used to thinking of him as a boy. It's always good to remember when we write that most readers have tons of stories in alerts. I usually try to do things from my experience in fanfiction. There are just a few stories that I actually remember the name when the alert comes without having to read a little of the chapter. Sometimes depending on how often the author updates I even have to go back a few chapters to remind myself. So, when a story has a female Blaise it can take a while to situate myself again when I'm reading.
    I don't think that's much your case because you update quite often and your stories are actually between the few that I know from just seeing the title what story I'm reading and have it fresh in my mind. But it's always good to consider how different reading fanfiction is from reading book.

    If the problem is that you want a Slytherin girl that wasn't very prominent in canon there is Daphne Greengrass. I really don't remember her much from Canon apart of the sorting.
    Anyway, keep up the good work and lets slip a potion in Connor's juice. What? no, I didn't say anything like that, I said lets add sugar to Connor's juice, to make it sweet, since he is such a sweet *cough*jerk*cough*, I mean person.

    Author's Response:

    First off, thanks for your opinion on the Blaise's gender. I still haven't decided what I want to do yet. I had thought about using Daphne, but (feel free to call me picky) I don't really like her name. And the whole Snape hexing/poisoning Connor thing? Would he ever do that? Noo... Oh wait. Yes he would! In fact, there is a little teaser on my site about the next chapter and it involves Snape meeting Connor...


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