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Title: Chapter 21 05 Aug 2008 3:35 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Nick was awesome, I've wanted to beat the ever loving *** out of Connor since the day he hit Harry. I'm glad Sev came to spend Christmas with them, he needs a surrogate family. The gifts were sweet.

    But it looks like Harry has amnesia. Maybe he needs to see a wizard healer? Update soon!

    Author's Response: I've had that scene in my head for the longest time. I always knew Nick would be the one to get Connor first but Snape will get a chance too- in the chapter I just posted. Thanks for the great review!
Title: Chapter 21 05 Aug 2008 3:18 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no, a cliffhanger - that makes four cliffhangers today.

    I am glad that Nick gave it to Conner. And I can't wait to see who Harry remembers.

    Author's Response: I hardly leave cliffhangers but every writer has to do it sometime... :)
Title: Chapter 21 05 Aug 2008 2:55 am
Reviewer: Oltl_lovr (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You know, I can't remember if I've reviewed this story before. I think I have, but I'm not positive. Either way, I'm reviewing now especially to say YOU SUCK!! Why, why would you end it like that? That's such a bad ending, and now I have to wait to find out what happens next. *sigh* Oh well, at least this story is worth the wait. I actually think this is one of the few stories I've read recently where I don't have to think for like 30 minutes or to read the last 5 chapters just to remember what story it is.

    I'm glad that Harry is free of Connor now and I hope he gets the book thrown at him. And I hope that Snape can help Harry with his memory, that the amnesia doesn't last for too long.

    Oh and lastly, go Nick:D

    Author's Response:

    Connor will most certainly get the book thrown at him, but that wont happen just yet. Thanks for reviewing and I hope you enjoy the latest chapter (just posted it too!)

Title: Chapter 21 05 Aug 2008 2:41 am
Reviewer: Johnny101 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What!?!?!?! Cliffhanger....Can't wait!

    :D

    Author's Response: Hope I didn't make you wait too long!
Title: Chapter 21 05 Aug 2008 2:39 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, a review!! Nick is wonderful, since you asked for that specifically. Connor is an ass. Insomnia, huh? I didn't see that one coming. Not a lot of Snape action in this one, even if he was over for xmas... Hope he's more prominent in the next one. I heart this story!! ~Cait

    Author's Response:

    My latest chapter is finally up and Snape is in it more than the last chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 21 05 Aug 2008 2:28 am
Reviewer: PadyandMoony (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You're in luck. I had a little time to read one update and saw yours in the top of my Inbox and went straight to it.
    Great chapter! Yes, Connor is finally gone and Snape will come to the rescue.
    I hope Harry gets his memory back soon. Interesting twist though.

    Author's Response: I thought I'd throw that little twist in there. It won't last for long though. Thanks again for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 20 29 Jul 2008 6:03 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't believe I didn't realize you updated until now! Thing is, I was away from the site for about a month and thought I'd gotten all caught up, but then I went through my mail and realized I missed a couple messages! All set now though :)

    Harry started off with a good time, what with being accepted into the Quidditch team and receiving the broom. However, it seems things went down hill after that. Those older students whom bullied him are jerks, I hope they get caught someday. Glad Susan was saved and Blaise's teasing after was funny, poor Harry always acts so indignant too :) It’s good the Professors showed up though, I doubt Harry could have handled the troll by himself much longer, being a first year.

    I'm happy Snape got Harry to talk some about Conner, and I also enjoyed the beginning with Cathy. It's good she is starting to take notice of things, hopefully something can be done soon.

    You did a great job with the Quidditch match, I could picture things perfectly :) I like how you alter things just slightly, so that your story includes cannon events but with a slight twist. I'm happy Harry enjoyed his first match and hope to read more soon!

    Author's Response: It's probably better that you didn't read until recently since you didn't have to wait as long as my other readers did. I slacked a bit on this last chapter... but the newest one is finally up!
Title: Chapter 2 17 Jul 2008 1:07 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    It seems to me that Vernon Dursley is little short of a sociopath. He has absolutely no conscience. He did't even check that Harry is dead. Did he consider that Harry might just tell any rescuer exactly who beat him up?

    Its just as well that canon Dursleys weren't as bad as most fanfic Dursleys or Harry would have been far too mentally damaged to face the Dark Lord.

    ~LesleY~

    Author's Response: Vernon was always a bit thick... And my Dursley's were a bit more harsh than I had planned but things will get better for young Harry with them gone from his life. Thanks for taking the time to review!
Title: Chapter 1 17 Jul 2008 12:44 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Nicely written. All I can say is Poor Harry, and someone should hang the Dursleys by their thumbs in their still dirty bathroom.
    I wonder if Harry's teacher is going to investigate Harry's circumstances or whether she will brush it under the carpet as his teachers in canon must have done.
    I mean, as if she cold believe that litte, skinny needs exercise more than his whale of a cousin.
    Onwards...

    ~lesleY~

    Author's Response: That's a good idea to do to the Dursleys! Hmmm, I wonder if that could fit in anywhere.... :)
Title: Chapter 20 10 Jul 2008 8:28 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    You did a great job on the Quidditch scene (and I agree with you, they are bloody difficult to write, as hard to write properly as battle scenes in my opinion). I love it that you have Fred and George being friends with Harry and Blaise is priceless with his cheeky sense of humour. Great job! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: I can't imagine what I will do if there are any battle scenes... That would be quite challenging to write! Glad you liked the chapter and thanks for reviewing!

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