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Title: Chapter 8 - Fathers 09 May 2008 9:05 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that you should call this chapter Suspenders. XD Poor Harry, he gets into so much trouble. His characterization is wonderfully done! And Snape - I wonder if seeing Harry in this position will anger him, or make him feel... sympathetic.

    Great chapter! I'm reviewing again since I read it again. :)
Title: Chapter 3 - Chores 09 May 2008 6:08 pm
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    Perry, just a question... How is this any different than how the Dursleys treat him? I mean, canonically speaking, he's always been treated like a house elf when he's home. Aside from the fact that it's a more old fashioned home, Snape's treating him exactly the same.

    Author's Response:

    There isn't much difference, is there?

     That was kind of my point.

    But thanks for reading and reviewing,

    Perry

Title: Chapter 8 - Fathers 09 May 2008 5:15 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    This was an absolutely brilliant chapter. This Harry is such an interesting creation. Most people write 11 year-old Harry as much too old mentally, even Rowling, and I really enjoy this Harry being able to engage in imaginative play. I always figured he had to entertain himself somehow in his cupboard all those years. And now he's "tormenting" Snape in a particularly hilarious way. I was laughing so hard in the middle of this as Harry maneuvers for an allowance and makes up stories and knows why calling Snape "Father" is only weird, but not impossible. And then you showed us so viciously what this Snape went through with his father and why he, like Harry, really has no clue about the whole father/son thing. Your Severus is so seriously messed up and will be so surprised to realize his redemption comes from his enemy's son. I can't wait to see how he responds to James' son being in the position he was in fifth year. Oh, and I also adore Vampyre. I think we have mutiny on our hands. ;-)
Title: Chapter 8 - Fathers 09 May 2008 3:50 pm
Reviewer: lily (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww cute chappie. Harry's so adorable the way he's making things up like the allowance. And how he insists that Snape cant play the game properly until he calls him 'Harry'. The last bit was cool. I wonder what Snape will do to Harry? Poor kid.
Title: Chapter 8 - Fathers 09 May 2008 6:42 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, poor Harry! He is just precious in this story. It's too bad that Snape doesn't know how to do better. That scene was touching, in a horrid kind of way. I wonder what Snape's reaction will be to catching Harry hanging from his suspenders?! HA! HAHA, poor kid.

    thank you so much for the update! I know you must be busy! I will probably send you a list of the typos tomorrow so that you can find them easily and change them without much work, unless you'd like me to just fix them for you on this site? There was a "Sanpe" and some others, and they stood out particularly this time, but I don't want to distress you or make you spend time fixing small things when you could be writing the next chapter!!

    Thanks for the update!!!

    Author's Response:

    If you'd like to fix them, I would be so glad. I wrote this right after turning in a 22-page paper and grading 20 papers for my class. I appreciate any help you can offer.

     Perry

Title: Chapter 8 - Fathers 09 May 2008 5:40 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think this is the funniest thing I have read in well...ever. I laughed all the way through.
Title: Chapter 8 - Fathers 09 May 2008 3:49 am
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh,this chapter made me laugh sooooo hard,and I'm not sure where you're going with the story so each chapter is usually a surprise for me, I really enjoy it.
Title: Chapter 8 - Fathers 09 May 2008 3:22 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    While I am obviously continuing to read this story, some of the primary interest is in seeing just how bizarre it is going to get, as each chapter just gets more and more odd. Snape actually seems to have lost touch with reality.
Title: Chapter 8 - Fathers 09 May 2008 3:22 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story keeps getting stranger and stranger. But it's good.
Title: Chapter 8 - Fathers 09 May 2008 3:17 am
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh dear. Well at least Harry's having fun at Snape's expense, those little snipes were so funny "yes i do take after my father don't i?" lol.

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