| Title: Cry II
| 14 Nov 2007 10:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Chibisnape (Anonymous)
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Fantastic im in love with this fic, Your writing style is such a pleasure to read wow please update soon i have to know what happens.
This is a very different take on the Slytherin!Harry story. I'm intrigued about why McGonagall loves Harry so much and with what will happen with the Gryffindors.
The writing was not as smooth as it could be in the beginning of the chapter, but it seemed to pick up some as you went along. There were numerous places where the phrasing seemed a little off.
Interesting and sad story so far. Hopefully things will eventually get better for Harry. I hope you find time to write more soon.
ACK! You can't stop there. I have too many questions!
(Wonderfully done. Kudos.)
This is an awesome story, and very original. Greatly looking forward to reading more to see what happens next, keep up the great work, and please update again soon. LES
i love all the flashbacks with Lily. Wow, what an ending to the chapter! What did Lily do? Wow, fantastic start!
“Potter, you do know that saltwater will render the potion useless, don’t you?”
WOW. What a start to a fantastic story! This is so heartbreakingly believable for the characters to do and go through! All except for Ron, maybe. But there needs to be an antagonist. Wow poor Harry! Beautiful writing! I'm all tense from it.
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