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Title: Chapter 49: Hopeful Denial 23 Mar 2008 2:56 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks!!!!  :o)
Title: Chapter 49: Hopeful Denial 23 Mar 2008 2:08 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    (Sob) Your baby is all grown up and posted! LOL, well, almost! :) I think this is another one of my fave chapters! Wonderful! you always have something for me to look forward too in the next chapter! This time it's the Order meeting!! I CAN"T WAIT! Please don't make me a very long time! :)
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: Order meeting for sure.  I can't wait either.  It's a strange feeling.  I'm sad that it's ending but excited to finally check that complete box as well.  :o)
Title: Chapter 49: Hopeful Denial 23 Mar 2008 2:01 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, I love the combined spell and Remus does have a bit of a temper there, doesn't he? I'm almost done with my fic too, I'll be posting more tonight, so you can check it out if you have time!

    Author's Response: I think it takes a lot to rile Remus up but when it happens, he means business!  :oP  I can't wait to read your new chappy.  Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter 49: Hopeful Denial 23 Mar 2008 2:00 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, again! I'm sad at the thought of this wonderful story ending...but at the same time, I'm so eager to know how it's all going to work out.

    Well, your little summary for this chapter is spot-on. It is easier to give up, though I suppose it's more like Severus and Harry just can't see a way out. I hope there's hope, though, perhaps this charm that can strengthen the connection?

    Anyway, I loved all the details as Sev and Harry re-enacted the charm, and it's good to know that Harry is the caster...at least we know it can be used to defeat Voldemort, and I know you've got to have something up your sleeve.

    I loved how Remus and Ginny, and the others, were trying so hard to make Severus and Harry have the will to fight. And it was so hard to read how Harry kept hovering between hope and resignation. He really is very brave. To accept such a thing is hard at any age, but especially at sixteen with so much to live for and look forward to. I sure hope this is going to have a happy ending!

    Author's Response:

    I feel the same way.  I'm can't wait to finally pull all the pieces together and have everyone share it with me, but I'm really sad as well.  It's such a mixed feeling here.  Sorta like Harry in this chaper.  LOL

    Severus and Harry are so conflicted and so wrapped up in everything, it's too hard for them to be objective right now.  Poor guys.  

    Yep, the silver lining at least.  Voldemort can be defeated.  YAY!

    Glad you liked the re-enactment. 

    Everyone was trying so hard.  Let's hope it worked to give these boys some hope.  Harry is very brave.  It makes this even harder because he's just so darn willing to sacrifice himself for the sake of Voldemort's defeat.  *sigh*  Thanks for the review! 

Title: Chapter 49: Hopeful Denial 23 Mar 2008 1:45 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    My goodness! That chapter really built up the suspense! I don't think I can take it any longer.

    Author's Response: Glad you liked the suspense!  You'll have to take it for a bit longer.  :oP
Title: Chapter 48: He Knows Not 20 Mar 2008 8:14 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    You made me cry you naughty girl! You got to teach me how to do that, i wanna make people cry! LOL, :P Wonderful, please update again I want to see more on Ron's reaction!

    Scorpia
Title: Chapter 47: Hold On 20 Mar 2008 7:54 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    (Sob, sniffle, sob, sob) So SAD!! (wail) I love my angst and you sure gave mea load of it!! LOL, beautifully written, fuulll of emotion. Congrats on the feautured story award, you deserve it!! When & if Harry tells the Weasleys, you might need to warn to bring tissues!! Remus is so sweet! GREAT chapter, I am so hyper now my cat is staring at me, LOL, :)
    Scorpia
Title: Chapter 48: He Knows Not 19 Mar 2008 9:58 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a beautiful chapter! I loved how Harry's friends are so determined to figure out what's wrong, and to be there to help him. I loved that they just Flooed on down to Severus' quarters...that's the Ron, Hermione, and Ginny I know. They won't let anyone stand between them and Harry.

    I loved how Tonks was able to knock some sense into Remus (figuratively, of course), and convince him that they need to fight for Harry and not just give up.

    I loved how Severus is watching his son, and is so determined to be with him, even beyond death.

    And the end, when Severus thought about how much Harry would miss if he died...that was heartbreaking!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Kristeh!  Glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Harry's friends are determined.  That kid really has no idea how much he's loved.  Tonks is awesome, isn't she?  I love that girl.  And Remus really needed a kick in the bum.  Severus is not letting Harry go anywhere on his own.  I love that man.  Heck, I just love everybody!  The end was difficult but at the same time, hopeful.  :o)

Title: Chapter 46: Shattered 14 Mar 2008 9:15 pm
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Just make me cry why don't you! Good Lord that's the most horrible thing I can imagine either of them going through. When I read chapter 34 of Deathly Hallows I bawled for Harry's sake. I couldn't imagine going through that horror. This scenario is possibly worse... Wow. Good job, though! Excellent writing!

    Author's Response: I do enjoy making my readers cry.  Makes me smile  (yep, I'm evil).  I'm so happ you're still enjoying and thanks so much for your awesome reviews.  :o)
Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 12 Mar 2008 6:10 pm
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    My only sense of relief from this chapter is that Remus and Dumbledore weren't Death Eaters in disguise. I SO certain that they were, when Remus gave Harry the sleeping draught, but I'm happy they weren't, lol. Now I'm scared to read the next chapter :( I know he can't be dead, but... yikes.

    Author's Response:

    Some others thought that as well.  LOL  Glad I could fool you.  It's fun.  :o)

    Yikes is right.   


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