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Reviews For Lily's Charm
Title: Chapter 33: Ashes 03 Mar 2008 6:07 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the song Dream On! It seems so perfect for this story to!
Title: Chapter 32: Separated 03 Mar 2008 5:54 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Dear, :( Snape better find his mind soon! I can't wait tp hear Harry's explanation about him & Snape when or if he tells the Weasleys.
Title: Chapter 31: Broken 03 Mar 2008 5:36 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    XXX's & OOO's Obsidan! I have to go read the next chappie! :)
Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 03 Mar 2008 5:18 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    (sob) I (hicup) loved this chapter, Severus better find a way to rise from the dead! :(

    Author's Response: Hmmm...you'll just have to wait and see.  Poor Sev and Harry.  :o(
Title: Chapter 29: Never Enough 03 Mar 2008 6:18 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens I am sure it will be exciting!

    Author's Response: Well, that's one for it, anyway.  :oP
Title: Chapter 28: Promises 03 Mar 2008 5:54 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I have tears in my eyes! This was the most beautiful, fantastic chapter I have read! Thank you for writing it, LOL. :)

    Author's Response: Well, you are very, very welcome, Scorpia!  Thank you so much.  I'm so thrilled you enjoyed it!  It's a fave of mine as well.  :o)
Title: Chapter 27: Revelations 03 Mar 2008 5:30 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how Albus had a bemused expression in the end! LOL, :) Harry has got to be kiddnapped! I can't wait! Lol, I'm all for angst & torture. :)
    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: LOL  Angst coming right up....Lucky you didn't have to wait through all the chapters!  :oP
Title: Chapter 44: Desperate Times 03 Mar 2008 4:09 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, OE, I just had to respond to your response for the chapter when Harry was wanting to move in permanently with his dad. You said that he wouldn't be there forever, well, it could be a pretty funny little ficlet to write about, say, Harry's 50th birthday and Severus trying to convince him that it's time for him to get his own place now. I couldn't write it...can't do humor, but you or someone else sure could!

    Author's Response: LOL  That would be hilarious.  Hee hee.  I love it.  I'm going to work on that, though Cathy would probably love a stab at that as well.  That reallly tickled me.  Thanks!
Title: Chapter 44: Desperate Times 03 Mar 2008 3:50 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I loved little Harry getting into the Floo powder! That was just too cute.

    And it was great to see the guys exploring the house together. I'm curious about James' possessions...what are they and will we see them again? Do they have anything to do with the plot?

    I'm glad to see that Harry realises he got off easy with his 'punishment' and that he is enjoying the time with his dad. I do know that Harry has to learn to control his emotions and understand the importance of that in relation to defeating Voldemort, but I'm just can't feeling that Harry doesn't really deserve to be punished for the fight with Plinth (or whatever his name was). He was severely provoked...I don't know that Severus himself would have resisted, for all his vaunted self-control, we have seen him lose it a couple of times, too...and Harry was just beginning to recover from an extremely difficult time.

    Anyway, I think Severus' response in having Harry stay with him in the evenings was perfect. He can justify to himself that he did something, that he didn't just let Harry off scott-free, but it's not really, truly a 'punishment', just a chance for them to spend more time together and continue to get to know one another.

    Loved seeing Harry interact with the young Slytherins, too! That was great, and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next with Draco, his mission, and the Malfoy family.

    Author's Response:

    I can't even tell you how happy I am that you got the whole punishment thing.  It wasn't really a punishment at all, at least not in Sev's mind.  But he was trying to make Harry feel more normal as his mates were severely punished by McGonagall (she went a bit too far, in my opinion) and it wouldn't have done for nothing to happen to Harry.  It LOOKS equal as Harry is away from his friends during the same time as Ron and Neville.   And yep, Sev knows he would have done the same.  He barely restrained himself from killing at least 3 people this week.  (Pinth, Filch and that Scorpius dude who said Harry should have just died), so yeah he doesn't blame Harry.  Anywho, glad you saw all that.  I love when that happens. 

    The 1981 scene was so fun.  I can't resist baby Harry!  

    James' possessions are up next.  That's all I'll say about that.

    Yay that you liked the Slytherins.  I think I can just picture Harry being good with little kids.  Don't know why really.  Draco of course, is up next again.  Thanks for reviewing! 

Title: Chapter 43: Immortal 03 Mar 2008 3:42 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that was exciting! Those Horcruxes are scary things, aren't they? I know in canon, they seemed to affect some people more than others, such as the locket seemed to have a worse effect on Ron than the other members of the Trio. Is that the case here? Anyway, it was frightening to see Dumbledore like that...good thing he's not permanently affected. At least I don't think he is. Guess I'll find out.

    Loved the scenes with Severus tending to Harry . He can be so tender and sweet, sometimes, but don't let him hear that!

    Author's Response: LOL  Yeah, best not to let Sev hear that!  That's sorta the case here, yeah...the horcrux affecting him differently.  There's a little more going on as well, but you'll have to wait right along with Harry for all the juicy details.  :oP  

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