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Title: Chapter 42: Reciprocity 03 Mar 2008 3:36 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter again, OE! I really have such mixed feelings about seeing Severus and Lily in the past, you know, though. On the one hand, those scenes are so romantic and show the strong love between the them so well, but on the other hand, it's heartbreaking, too.

    I certainly understand Severus not being willing to risk Harry and the Charm, without knowing how it will work out with him. I'm even a bit annoyed with Dumbledore for pushing it. Yes, it may be a good way to defeat Voldie, and yes, Harry will have to face Voldie eventually anyway. But they need to be sure they've come up with a plan that will give Harry his absolute best chance of succeeding, too. And Harry is all Severus has left, really. Of course he wants to be sure everything will work properly! What kind of dad wouldn't?

    I loved the scene where Harry tells Severus that he wants to move in his quarters permanently. I completely agree that that is something Harry would want at this point in their relationship. It may not be what a typical sixteen-year-old would want, but Harry has never had a loving family before, well, not that he can remember. Of course he wants to spend all the time he can with his dad now that they've found one another.

    I'm glad that Harry's friends support his decision, too. I can understand Ron's hesitation, though, because Harry moving out of the Tower is a loss to him. He'll still see Harry of course, probably a lot, but it's not the same as Harry living with him in the dorm.

    And I loved 'the talk'! Perfect characterization of both guys!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Kristeh!  Glad you enjoyed it.  I loved this chapter.  I have mixed feelings too about the past.  It's hard to see them happy...it makes the present all the more tragic.  *sigh*

    Yeah, Dumbledore really has a very focused mind and althouth he cares about Harry, his job really is to get rid of Voldy and you're completely right in all you said about Sev not being willing to do it yet until they have the best plan in mind.  

    I am glad you understood about Harry wanted to live with his dad.  Sure, it may not be a typical response for a typical teenager but Harry has never had anything typical and now that he has a dad, he just wants to have a bit of what he missed.  Glad you weren't annoyed with Ron.  Of course, it was hard to accept.  He'll miss his mate!  But yeah, they'll still see each other.  And I'm sure Harry won't live there forever.  LOL

    The talk was so incredibly fun!  :oP

    Thanks for revieiwing.  

Title: Chapter 44: Desperate Times 02 Mar 2008 8:39 pm
Reviewer: Tsuby (Signed) [Report This]
    Another lovely surprise on Sunday morning ^_^. I love it when I get up in the morning and find a brand new chapter of your story to read! And I absolutely love how the relationship between Harry and Severus is developing. Severus does not look like the "fatherly type" at all, but he absolutely is. Wow, awesome!

    Author's Response: Thanks.  He really is the fatherly type yay!  Especially in this story as he is recapturing what he used to be.  Glad you enjoyed it and happy to give you a nice Sunday morning present!  Thanks for letting me know you're still enjoying!  :o)
Title: Chapter 25: Snape's Misery 02 Mar 2008 8:04 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I could siiinnnng because this is a wonderful story!

    Author's Response: Well, thanks!  LOL
Title: Chapter 24: Acceptance 02 Mar 2008 7:55 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the fan vid for lily's charm! It was brill! great chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, it was pretty cool, eh?  She's talented, that one.  :o)

Title: Chapter 23: Stop 02 Mar 2008 7:26 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Curse you and your amazing cliffhangers! :( I hope Remus isn't dead.

    Author's Response: LOL  Well, at least you don't have to wait to find out!  Love cliffies!
Title: Chapter 22: Finding the Words 02 Mar 2008 7:11 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I LOVE Superman from five for fighting! I loved Twilight more then New Moon & Eclispe. I also loved this chapter!

    Author's Response: LOL  I was not a fan of New Moon and Eclipse.  Stupid Jacob.  Glad you enjoyed!
Title: Chapter 21: Saturday 02 Mar 2008 6:57 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's is trooooouuble! LOL, (shakes head) Doesn't that boy ever learn?

    Author's Response: Well, eventually, he will.  It's gonna take quite a few more chapters though.  LOL 
Title: Chapter 44: Desperate Times 02 Mar 2008 3:22 pm
Reviewer: Keina (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh yes I so want Harry to change his name ! and Draco...oh well I never liked the boy. Step away from my Sev, child, don't mess up with our little happy family, I'm warning you("me too" says the unicorn) ;-)

    Author's Response: LOL  Poor Draco.  Can't even get any sympathy.  Don't worry, unicorn.  Draco has his own family.  :oP
Title: Chapter 20: Vulnerable 02 Mar 2008 7:30 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad i didn't go to bed, this chapter so far had the best fluff! Lol, :)

    Author's Response: LOL  Well, get prepared beacause it's not the last!  LOL  Glad you enjoyed it though.  :o)
Title: Chapter 19: Flight 02 Mar 2008 7:20 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Uuugh! Cliff hanger! and i was going to go to bed after this chapter, but now I won't be able to sleep so i have to read on. if i get sleep deprived I'm blaming you! Lol, :)

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