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Title: Chapter 44: Desperate Times 02 Mar 2008 5:09 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh gosh, that was so good. And so much fun after last one's drama. It was nice to see Severus showing Harry how much James was appreciated.

    I feel so sorry for Draco. And I don't like Moody too much. Hit him for me.

    Author's Response:

    LOL  I would waaaay too scared to hit Moody.  He'd kill me.  LOL

    I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter.   And yes, James was appreciated way back then...

    Thanks for reviewing!  I really appreciate it!  :o)
     

Title: Chapter 43: Immortal 29 Feb 2008 7:15 am
Reviewer: cathyrf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I’ve been on vacation and missed a couple of reviews, so I’m hoping to make up for it with this one. a

    The change of pace this chapter took…action filled…was so fascinating to me and terribly fun to read. Up to this point, OE has spent considerable time and effort (much to our delight and fanfare) building up the relationship between Harry and Severus, and it’s interesting to see how outside forces now test them. Yes, Halloween was also a time of outside influences affecting our boys, but their relationship wasn’t nearly as strong (at least from Harry’s point of view) as it is now, proved by how Harry reacted afterwards. I will continue to watch with high interest how the world now mucks with my guys and how they react to it together.

    Severus’ reactions at the beginning of the chapter reminded me somehow of that mother, who having realized that her child is in the road in the way of the city bus, becomes SuperMom and grabs them and throws them to safety. Because isn’t that kind of what he did when he grabbed Harry and threw him into the floo? And speaking of Severus here…that man can take charge. He puts Harry into the safest place possible in mere seconds due to Possessed Dumbledore, throws up a shield to protect Remus, subdues Dumbles, contacts Minerva and Poppy for their assistance, gets Minerva to cast a shield around the evil locket and I think he barely broke a sweat. I’m in serious lust with this guy. Yes, I know I need a life - don’t remind me.

    Poor Harry is just never going to get the hang of floo travel. And frankly, I couldn’t either because I have the grace of an elephant. Of course, getting flung at hyper speed doesn’t make it conducive to a picturesque landing, but heck…it’s got to be better than being in danger of a red-eyed possessed Dumbledore. *shudders*

    Poor Severus, he grabs Remus and heads to the safe house thinking, “Damn, I did a great job here and my son is safe” and he finds Harry sitting there with a bloody face. I could practically hear Remus gasp.

    (And I so wish it was as easy to mend broken bones and boo-boo’s for us as it is for wizards. Sigh.)

    I do wonder why the floo powder wouldn’t open for Harry, but it also gave me my favorite line from the story:

    “But I tried that exact incantation,” he exclaimed.
    “How very odd,” his father mused as he took a pinch of the Powder.

    Oh, I could just hear Severus saying that. And in such an innocent voice, as if Severus was innocent a day in his life.

    My second favorite line was Remus commenting on how Severus would never admit they were friends. Watch out Sev! You just might be calling Remus “my buddy” soon. OK, I know it will never happen but it’s amusing to think all the same, don’t you agree?

    I loved the cozy picture of Harry, Severus, and Remus hanging out in the safe house and discussing the horcruxes. But I won’t ponder yet if and when Severus realizes Harry is one….oh brrr…..

    More ponderings…why did the two horcruxes affect Dumbledore in that way? I refuse to speculate because I’m always dead wrong so I’ll have to wait until OE enlightens us some more.

    I’m glad I got to find out background on Pinth and what has happened to him. I’m not convinced we’ve heard the last of him but we’ll see. And Filch….why the heck does Dumbles keep him around? Even if he got a lecture from the old wizard he no doubt got a damned lemon drop or some such thing afterward. I just don’t get it. Ooh…I hate that guy. Can I shake him hard?

    I hope OE’s not planning on finishing this story in, let’s say, the next five chapters or so because I might need to go throw myself under a truck or something if she does. It would leave my children motherless and she’d feel awfully guilty (hint, hint).

    Almost forgot the hug…it goes to Harry of course. A broken nose has got to hurt like a dickens.

    Author's Response:

    Hmmm...this whole world meets boys things is giving me too many ideas....postcards, Cathy...postcards!

    I almost died laughing from your supermom anology...I don't think Sev would appreciate it though!  LOL  Where's my pic, Cathy?  :oP  And yeah, lust it up....me too!  I love him.

    Yeah, Sev isn't really pleased with breaking Harry's nose.  Too much guilt from his childhood.  Poor guy.  

    LOL  So many questions about the Floo Powder.  Hope you all enjoy the answer.  I enjoyed that line too but of course I know why it wouldn't open.  Hee hee.

    LOL about Sev calling him his buddy.  Don't think so, Cathy!  And lower your voice...Sev will not appreciate it!  

    Hmmm....Is Harry a horcrux?  I do believe Sev will have a heart attack if he is....  Brrrr is right.

    you'll have to wait to find out more about the horcruxes!   Sorry....

    Pinth...Hmmm.  Filch....Hmmmm

    Five chapters you say?  All right...we'll make it six!  LOL

    Harry needs a hug, it's true.  Poor nose! 

     

     

     

Title: Chapter 43: Immortal 29 Feb 2008 1:46 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great Chapter, I loved how you handled the Horcrux possession, Sev is awesome as always! Can't wait to find out what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thanks.  Horcruxes are fun, aren't they?  LOL  Glad you enjoyed it.  :o)
Title: Chapter 12: After Eileen 28 Feb 2008 11:28 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm giggling gleefully right now! I loved the end where Harry found out that it was Snape beside his bed and not Remus. OoO!! I'm beginning to like Ginny more because of your story, :)
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: Really?  You like Ginny more?  *does a happy dance*  I love that!  Yay.  I love Ginny but never felt there was really a great reason for Harry to care about her so much, all of a sudden, you know.  So yeah, in this Ginny is one of the people that will be beside him through everything and it helps.  Yay!  Yeah...old Snape has surprised Harry again.  And perhaps in a good way this time.  :oP
Title: Chapter 43: Immortal 28 Feb 2008 11:19 pm
Reviewer: Tsuby (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I was so busy at work that I could not read for a few days (ok, I admit that I was writing in my lunch-break all the week :P), so tonight I finally had the time to read the last two chapters you wrote and, as usual, I loved them. The characters are so real, Severus is just like I expect him to be as a father, while Harry is totally unexpected, which is also awesome, because he is a teenager and they should be unpredictable. The story is really good, but the characters' development is even better!
Title: Chapter 43: Immortal 28 Feb 2008 10:10 pm
Reviewer: hisluv (Signed) [Report This]
    this story is great and you are fantastic, I'm voting for Lily's Charm to become featured, you deserve it! :>

    Author's Response: Well, thank you very much.  I really appreciate it and I'm so happy you're enjoying the story.  I hope you continue to enjoy.  Thanks so much as well for letting me know.  :o)
Title: Chapter 11: Consequences 28 Feb 2008 7:41 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Go Severus! Loooved this chappie! Lol, :)

    Author's Response: I do too.  Thanks!  It's one of my favorites.  Go Sevvie, indeed!  LOL
Title: Chapter 10: Interfering Old Coot 28 Feb 2008 7:37 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    So emotional! I LOVE it! :P Wonderful chapter, I can't wait to see what's wrong with Draco & more Snape. :D

    Author's Response: What is NOT wrong with Draco!  LOL  I'm glad you enjoyed the emotions.  Get ready for more!  :oP
Title: Chapter 9: Truth 28 Feb 2008 7:27 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed the scene with Albus, Remus, Snape & Harry! great job, take a bow! (claps)

    Author's Response: ROFL  *taking a bow*  You're too much, Scorpia!
Title: Chapter 8: Lily's Lie 28 Feb 2008 7:16 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    No! it can't be true! Snape placed that memory in his mind to protect Harry or something else very fatherly!! Lol, It can't be true!

    Author's Response: LOL.  You're too funny!

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