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Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 28 Jan 2008 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Tsuby (Signed) [Report This]
    Waaah!!! I need more!
    I simply loved it! I wish I could write like that ;_;
    I'm waiting for the next chapter, but please... I love happy endings!!

    Author's Response:

    YAY that you loved it.  I'm so glad.  More is coming....up soon. 

    Can't give away any details though!  LOL

Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 28 Jan 2008 6:47 pm
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    OK...I had to be up at 4 a.m. with a kid having nightmares and when I had trouble going back to sleep I had one thought in my head...

    WHERE IS THAT DAMN FAWKES WHEN YOU NEED HIM!

    Going back to drinking coffee now.

    Author's Response: Oh, you are too funny.  I told PK I wouldn't respond to the two of you and your funnyness because I'm supposed to be writing but I can't help myself.  Okay...back to my chapter.  LOL
Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 28 Jan 2008 4:17 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    "Hmmm...nope Sev's not going to be giving out any details of the night's activities. Sorry."
    WHAT DOES THAT MEAN?!!! NOOO!! I want to speculate and talk, not go to class...but I just had to ask!!

    Author's Response: LOL  *evil cackle*
Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 28 Jan 2008 3:49 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Nooooo. Sobbing. update (he can't be dead - JKR did that to us - sob).

    He promised.

    (How did Voldie know?)

    Author's Response:

    :o(  Sorry you're sad (but not really as I love a crying reader...LOL) 

    Nope, can't give anything away.  What fun would that be?  :oP 

Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 28 Jan 2008 1:16 pm
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    No! What a cliffhanger. We got two chapters though so I can't complain. We did get two chapters didn't we? Otherwise I just missed one previously.

    I liked that Harry told Severus he loved him but it did make everything final. Though Severus does have to wake up so he can tell Harry aloud. Doesn't he? How did Harry wake up after the Dreamless Sleep potion too? I was expecting him to be kind of stuck.

    And how did Severus survive? I'm guessing it has something to do with Lucius being given the opportunity to kill him? I kind of hope he's okay too, which is strange because I really hate the guy in everything else.

    Well I think you already know how frustrated you're making the readers with this ending so I won't nag. Best of luck with the next one though, can't wait!

    Author's Response:

    LOL  Thanks for not nagging...though really I don't mind.  Let's me know you're all still with me! 

    Sort two chapter...yeah.  Two in one day at least!  YAY!  

    It wasn't Dreamless Sleep...just a regular old Sleeping Draught like he had at the Weasley's way back in chapter two and only a mild one because he was just going a big hysterical there at the end.  LOL

    No secret telling now.  :o)  You'll just have to wait.  I'm glad you're rooting for Lucius a bit.  He needs it, that one.  Thanks for the review!  :o) 

Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 28 Jan 2008 9:41 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh no! What a cliffie! What a fantastic story.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Sorry about the cliffie!  :oP  Thanks for reviewing. 
Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 28 Jan 2008 8:54 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy. I don't know how I found myself with my face nearly up against the screen. I have no idea when I breathed last but when the chapter was over I let out a whoosh I hadn't known I was holding in. What a chapter! I love that you had Harry telling Snape he loved him in the beginning and that you updated so quickly so we got to hear it soon. But now you've left us with a very unwell Snape and that's just unacceptable. Madame Pomfrey is really good at what she does so please get her in here to fix this right away. Harry needs his dad!

    Author's Response:

    LOL  Harry does need him it's true.  Keep those fingers crossed.  I love though that you felt the chapter so intensely.  That just makes my day.  LOL 

    I'm glad you liked Harry telling Snape he loved him.  That was really fun to write.  Don't worry...the update will be up soon as usual.  I won't keep you all in suspense for too, too long!  Thanks for reviewing.  :o) 

Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 28 Jan 2008 8:40 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, OE, I need chapter 31 NOW! I need to know that Severus will be all right. I'm begging you...please, please, please!!!

    I could hardly read this chapter. I was on pins and needles the whole time. I can't stand it for Severus and for Harry.

    The only good thing is Voldie knows, so they wouldn't have to hide being father and son, and Sev won't have to spy anymore. He has to get well because I don't think Harry could survive without him now.

    Please update soon, and please let Severus be all right!

    Author's Response:

    LOL  It will be up soon.  My son as preschool this morning so after I drop him off...hee hee....hours of blissful writing! YAY.

    I'm glad you found the chapter so intense.  Love that!  You're right...as Harry said, he will never rise from that dark place if Sev doesn't survive.  Poor Harry.  Thanks for the review!   :o) 

Title: Chapter 29: Never Enough 28 Jan 2008 8:26 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, I've been meaning to tell you how much I love your video and banner for a while now, but by the time I got the end of the review, I'd forget. Me bad, I know. So I'm making sure to say it first this time.

    This may be my favorite chapter, yet. I know it won't be my favorite chapter of all, because there's going to be at least one, when Sev and Harry have survived Halloween and the relationship can be openly acknowledged and they're all safe from Voldie, that's just filled with sweet, loving little moments, right? Right? You better be saying "Right, of course. How clever you are to have foreseen this."!!!

    Well, now that we've got that settled...Severus' nightmare was heartbreaking, and I loved how he went to check on Harry, and how he made Remus promise to look after Harry if something happened to Sev. Of course, that's a moot promise because Severus is going to be just fine, we've agreed about that.

    Harry needs to be able to have an adult keep a promise to him for once. I was glad to see that he's trusting his dad on this.

    Loved them looking at pictures, and Harry joking about he'd thought his new clothes might all be black.

    I loved how Severus apologized for his behavior after the Pensieve, too.

    Author's Response:

    Yay!  Glad you like the videos and banner.  cathyrf and Siriuslyenthralled are certainly talented, aren't they?  :o)

    LOL  Nope sorry, not saying that.  Not saying anything!  

    The nightmare was really fun to write.  Wasn't it just so sweet that he went to check on Harry?  Awww.  

    Harry needs someone it's true.  So sad.  Poor boy.

    I'm glad you liked the pictures and the clothes part.  They really are settling into some semblance of normalcy, aren't they?  :o)

    And yep, it was nice of Sev to apologize...I think he was feeling like they needed to make sure the air was clear between them before he went off.  *sigh*  

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 28 Jan 2008 8:22 am
Reviewer: Keina (Signed) [Report This]
    Noooooo you didn't ! nononono I say he's alive. You wouldn't dare. Nah ! I'm sulking FOR LIFE !

    Author's Response:

    Nope, won't say.  Can't say.  You'll just have to wait!  LOL 

     


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