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Reviews For Lily's Charm
Title: Chapter 14: Nudges from Remus 27 Mar 2022 9:26 pm
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    I agree 100% with your note. Harry Potter was created solely for the severitus fanfiction that comes after.
Title: Chapter 34: Embers 14 Oct 2018 4:53 am
Reviewer: lilyswinter (Signed) [Report This]
    Dear lord I'm crying. This story is so heart wrenching and so, so we'll done. I've been holding my breath since the Death Eater scene, and I'm SO glad that Severus is back. My shoulders sagged in relief at the same time that Harry's did.

    Amazing chapter, as always!
Title: Chapter 24: Acceptance 14 Oct 2018 12:53 am
Reviewer: lilyswinter (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like the way you keep developing Snape and Harry's bond. It's endearing how tentative they are around each other, because they both care so much more than they're willing to show.

    I especially liked this chapter, because it shows how open and willing Harry is to love. He really has such a generous soul, and it balances out Snape's taciturn nature well. I don't think they'd ever be able to restore their relationship without that balance.

    It's been nice to see Harry taking brave steps forward, not sure if he'd be rejected, and then Severus offering reassurance in return.

    Anyhow! I'm glad that Remus is okay, and very curious about what he and Dumbledore might have been up to. My guess is Horcrux hunting, perhaps? (If there are Horcruxes in this AU, which I don't know if they are.)

    I'm very curious if Snape knows the truth about Harry and Voldemort's connection yet (if indeed Harry is a Horcrux in your world) and what Snape plans to do about it if so. I can't imagine that he'd just let Harry sacrifice himself, so I've been trying to figure out what alternatives Snape might concoct.

    Wow that was a ramble! Anyway, this story has me utterly engaged, and I'm enjoying being immersed in the world you created. It all feels so real.

    Alright, I'm off for more binge reading!
Title: Chapter 1: Of Mothers and Babies 14 Oct 2018 12:43 am
Reviewer: lilyswinter (Signed) [Report This]
    I've been binge reading this series like crazy on mobile, which doesn't let you leave comments, so I wanted to stop in real quick and say how much I'm loving this.

    You develop Harry and Severus in such interesting ways, and I love the backstory you've created for them. I read this years ago, while it was still in progress, and I'm having a blast re-reading it now that it's complete.

    Anyway, thanks for creating such an awesome story, and taking the time and effort to share it with the world!
Title: Chapter 55: Echoes 16 May 2014 10:59 pm
Reviewer: Magnolia Carvell (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a very neat and fine story. Ordinary, but you have the ability to make and write it extraordinarily.
    Some mistakes i pointed out is you have a little problem with paragraphing. But it does get better to the end. I think you really deserved it to be mentioned at The Economist.
    Good luck for your future endeavor in writing!
Title: Chapter 55: Echoes 22 Feb 2014 8:37 am
Reviewer: Dimplz (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it. I left a longer review at FF net. This story was amazing! I'm so glad I found it!
Title: Chapter 50: Unexpected 10 Oct 2013 1:28 am
Reviewer: thewandcrafter (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Dear god, I've been in tears for CHAPTERS.
Title: Chapter 34: Embers 02 Dec 2012 1:21 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    yeah I love you (bows and worships) many HUGS
Title: Chapter 31: Broken 02 Dec 2012 12:12 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    It was a good chapter but I hat eyou so much. I balled my eyes out. I need to change my shirt the collar is soaked.
Title: Chapter 55: Echoes 24 Feb 2011 6:53 am
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    I will review the whole story in this chapter; I'd only just finished it, three at one go. Lol.

    Absolutely wonderful. I love how Severus turned out, along with Harry. The events in between, the tension, the sheer love i can feel=Awesome. I like how you kept Snape strictly in character though. ^^

    fantastic. Worth every bit of my time.

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