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Title: Chapter 10: Interfering Old Coot 06 Dec 2007 6:27 pm
Reviewer: bellatrix (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm still in love with this. It's been a while since a story has totally grabbed my attention like this. Yay! Though I was reading it instead of writing a paper for university. Ooops. :-)

    Author's Response: LOL!  Good to know I take precedence of your papers.  :-)  Warm fuzzies for you.  I'm so glad you still like it.  More will be up in a few days.
Title: Chapter 10: Interfering Old Coot 06 Dec 2007 4:59 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm stuned. You have really done a good job of characterization. I was wondering what exactly Snape's reaction would be, but it wasn't that! But what you've done is perfect!! It's so Snape! (And I love Harry's comment about his temper!)

    One thing that I noticed, though. McGonagall teaches Transfiguration, not Charms. Does she have any idea what's going on? And Draco, I'm dissapointed in that toe rag! What a jerk, that Slytherin!! Urgh! (I hope Harry hexes him in the next chapter!)

    But wow! I can't wait to see into Severus' mind in the next chapter, he's going to be really confused trying to figure everything out while determining what he believes is true. Hopefully he does see that he IS Harry's father and totally A.K.s his mum is she's still alive. Man, she's mean! It would also be really good for Harry, obviously, if Severus accepts him...even if he's already been rejected. But, that's a good thing too, because it'll make Severus try REALLY hard to gain Harry's trust and thus prove to him that he wants to be his father. Although Voldie does prove difficult to deal with...hmmm. I bet you've got a great plot bunny to skirt around that one, though!

    I'm also looking forward to some agnst from Harry, after his rejection. It's going to be hard on him and I hope that Ginny get's a bigger part in this...

    Well, off to class! Keep writing!

    Author's Response:

    Oh!  Thanks for the note about McGonagall.  I did that in the other chapter too but I changed it now.

    I'm so glad you liked the way Snape sort of lost it at the end there and that you were pleasantly surprised by it.  It's nice to know I've got something spot on!

    Draco is a git, isn't he?  But, we do have plans for him.

    Next chapter is chock full of Sev's thoughts and it's entitled "Consequences" so it's gonna be fun.  I'm so glad you are looking forward to it so much.  And yeah, Eileen is a little *****, it's she?  :-)

    Lots more Ginny too.  After all, Harry wouldn't be Harry without Ginny!  Love her. Thanks for the reveiw!

     

Title: Chapter 10: Interfering Old Coot 06 Dec 2007 4:53 pm
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    This is awesome! It's been ages since I've read a well written and new Severitus/Sevitus story. I'm not anxiously waiting for the next chapter. He can't be really rejecting him!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm so glad you like it.  The next chapter is in the works and will be up in a few days.  You'll have to wait and see what old Sev is up to!  :o)
Title: Chapter 10: Interfering Old Coot 06 Dec 2007 1:52 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    where did snape go?

    Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see....   :oP
Title: Chapter 10: Interfering Old Coot 06 Dec 2007 1:48 pm
Reviewer: Rimma (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh! Oh, Harry, poor Harry. I love this story so much! I’m on the edge of my seat for more. You’ve hooked me so completely to their lives and their pains. They’re a mess but they have such potential to be incredibly happy and its torturous to read the struggle, but brilliant! and I can’t wait to read more. *LOVES*

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Thanks so much for the review.  I'm glad you like the story so much and I love that you are feeling the pain for these people.  It is been really painful to write some of these chapters.  More is coming soon.  Lots more angst and drama for you too!  :o)
Title: Chapter 10: Interfering Old Coot 06 Dec 2007 9:57 am
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow.....

    Oh wow...

    Kind of picking myself off the floor with this installment. Yikes!

    I'm glad the new revelations came out immediately (and what and why does Dumbledore know what he knows....clearly so much more than meets the eye). Hmmm....

    The Snape fury at the end.....LOVED IT! I wouldn't want to be Mummy right now...that confrontation will not be pretty.

    And how will Snape react to Harry when he returns?

    So many questions! You have all the answers! As I said before, your story has grabbed me hook, line and sinker and I'm glad you update frequently. I haunted the computer this evening when you mentioned you'd be updating again. I only do that when a story "speaks" to me in the way yours has. Bravo!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much.  I'm thrilled by how much you are enjoying the story.  I think yeah, something had to give and Harry just wasn't going to wait around anymore...that is a boy of action! 

    Dumbledore is always up to something, isn't he?  :)

    Glad you liked Snape at the end there.  Those were really fun paragraphs to craft.  I just adore a furious Snape, don't you?  Almost as much as a warm and fuzzy one.  LOL

    The next chapter will be up in a couple days, I hope.  I hope you keep enjoying and that my story keeps "speaking" to you.  Thanks again for your awesome review.   

Title: Chapter 10: Interfering Old Coot 06 Dec 2007 9:24 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    virtual chocolate frogs for being so good about updating this awesome story ^_^

    Author's Response: Yummy...chocolate frogs.  :o) 
Title: Chapter 9: Truth 05 Dec 2007 11:40 pm
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow - this is exciting! I just read chapters 1-9 straight through and I'm on pins and needles! You've definitely got another reader hooked here.

    Love how you're writing all the characters. Can't wait until the next chapter.

    Author's Response: YAY!  Thanks so much for reviewing.  It's great to have another excited reader.  The next chapter will even be up later tonight as I just have a couple of tweaks to do to it once the kids get to bed!  Thanks for the compliment about the characterizations!  They are so much fun to write.  Hope you keep enjoying!
Title: Chapter 9: Truth 05 Dec 2007 7:46 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness. It all makes sense now, doesn't it? At least I think it does. I feel so sorry for both Lily and Severus, and now for Harry, too. I do wonder, though, if Dumbledore is as clueless about this as he acts. I'm thinking that he knows everything there is to know and for whatever reason he's keeping it from Snape and Harry. I don't think they will be too happy if they find out that he's hiding something so important from them.

    Thanks for the update. Can't wait for the next....

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, at least it makes sense to Harry.  And yeah, this has been really hard to write as it is so filled with so many emotions for all of them.  What a happy family they could have been....

    Well, there is lots of good old Dumbledore in the next chapter so I guess we'll see what the old coot is up to...maybe.  :o)

    The update is coming soon.  Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 9: Truth 05 Dec 2007 5:59 pm
Reviewer: Sevvus_Harry (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! So Harry really is Sev's son... Poor Sev, he didn't think Lily would actually betrayed him, did he? Stupid Eileen Prince...

    Author's Response: Yeah, Eileen really is a problem, isn't she?  And, hey you're almost writing lines from my next chapter there with your review.  :o)  Thanks for reviewing!

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