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Reviews For Lily's Charm
Title: Chapter 22: Finding the Words 16 Aug 2010 5:42 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    He's said it! ^^

    Oh, now I really can't wait to see what happens next!

    Great chappie!
Title: Chapter 21: Saturday 16 Aug 2010 8:01 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, dear. This bodes not well. >.- Acting without knowing all the fact = generally not good.

    Another awesome chapter - can't wait to find out more about What's Going On.
Title: Chapter 20: Vulnerable 16 Aug 2010 7:20 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Bravo! Well done on this chapter. Dunno about you, but I find emotional scenes oft-times difficult to write.
Title: Chapter 19: Flight 16 Aug 2010 5:57 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    I knew it wasn't going to go well when Harry was told to earn a detention. *shakes head*

    Hope they can resolve this newest rift.
Title: Chapter 18: Progress 16 Aug 2010 4:57 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how Harry uses a 'dementor storm' for his mental defenses. And Snape is right - Harry really does need to let himself grief. I don't think he ever truly did, in canon, really. Not during the course of the books, anyway.

    Great chap.
Title: Chapter 16: Help 16 Aug 2010 3:34 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw..! ^^ I like how Sev kept Lily's things - and how he's actually *teaching* this time around.

    Good chap.
Title: Chapter 15: Dark Mark 16 Aug 2010 1:33 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh... I think I like this turn with the Malfoys. Certainly caught my interest.
Title: Chapter 14: Nudges from Remus 16 Aug 2010 12:12 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm... what is happening with Malfoy, I wonder?

    Good chapter. I especially liked the section near the end. Well done!
Title: Chapter 13: Vigil 15 Aug 2010 11:36 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    One step forward... two steps back. *sigh* Nothing's ever easy, is it?

    Great chapter.
Title: Chapter 11: Consequences 15 Aug 2010 9:08 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the way Snape elected to punish his mother, the foul harpy. No mother should willingly be the source of so much pain and anguish to their child.

    Well writ.

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