Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For The Last Gift
Title: Chapter 40: Ghosts 29 Sep 2009 11:12 pm
Reviewer: Mimiheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear, that ultimatum... *sigh*

    Author's Response: quite bad, wasn't it ?
Title: Chapter 40: Ghosts 29 Sep 2009 12:57 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, I don't like the way it ended. Harry blackmailed Severus emotionally. Naughty boy Harry.

    I think that Harry doesn't really understand what he needs.He doesn't know what it's like to have a parent; someone that's responsible for him, and whose number one priority is his safety. The poor boy always thinks he has to be the strong one; he thinks that he has to be the adult. He doesn't know how to rely on someone, and that's so sad. Snape just wants to protect Harry; be a parent to him.

    I hope that Harry gets it together soon, before he loses the best thing that's ever happened to him.

    Great chapter Keina. I always get so excited, when I see that you've updated.

    Author's Response:

    yes, that was quite mean, but Harry is being very emotional at the moment. Not really thinking things clearly, you see? After visiting graves, well... I think that Snape will understand.

    But they're on the right way ;-)

Title: Chapter 40: Ghosts 29 Sep 2009 3:55 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh, that ending really smarted. I'm not surprised that Harry said what he did at the end, trying to use Severus like that, but it didn't make it any less horrible. Poor Severus is probably about to embark on a nice guilt trip, courtesy of Harry. Ouch.

    I really enjoyed the stories about Severus' relatives and how Harry's emotions bounced back and forth and Sev during this chapter. Really, it was all quite good. I'm excited to see how they solve their latest problem; please update soon!

    -P.G.

    P.S. I have to tell you, I just got a cat and it's a black male named Shadow, lol! I own Snape's cat! I thought I might try and take a picture of him with a white lightning bolt on his head for Halloween...he'd be cute dressed as Harry Potter/Shadow from your story. I'll see what I can do (he's not a big fan of getting his picture taken, so it might take me several tries to get the photo, lol)!

    Author's Response:

    oh yes it was a bit naughty! But well, circumstances... I think he can be excused.

    I hope I'll be able to develop more of Severus' family's story, but probably not in this story.

    Oh and you're cat, that's just too funny! I totally want to see pictures! Does he like to take showers, too ? ;-)

Title: Chapter 30- If You Do Not Want To Die 27 Sep 2009 2:52 am
Reviewer: unknown reader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hot story

    Author's Response: thanks :-)
Title: Chapter 39: Shadows of the Past 24 Sep 2009 7:55 am
Reviewer: Mimiheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh... this was heartbreaking in a good way. I loved it.

    Author's Response: more heartbreaking coming ;-)
Title: Chapter 27- Crimson and Gold 22 Sep 2009 2:00 am
Reviewer: unknown reader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow amazing

    Author's Response: thank you :-)
Title: Chapter 20 - In the Shadow 18 Sep 2009 7:42 pm
Reviewer: unknown reader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great story..
Title: Chapter 39: Shadows of the Past 17 Sep 2009 8:16 pm
Reviewer: clauclauclaudia (Signed) [Report This]
    ***Snape raised his left arm and clapped his hand on his covered forearm. "There's a reason I bear this Mark. Don't mistake me for your lapdog, Headmaster. Never."

    Dumbledore's mouth closed, and he nodded, his eyes glittering.***

    That, is a magnificent scene. And everyone has a different understanding of it. Beautiful.

    Author's Response: ahhh Merlin, I'm so happy that someone got the double meaning of this :-) Thank you very much! I enjoyed writing that a lot indeed :-)
Title: Chapter 39: Shadows of the Past 17 Sep 2009 2:26 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What an awesome chapter! I loved it; there was so much depth. Poor Remus...it is a terrible dilemma he is in with Loki, and what a sad history for Loki and his mother. I hope that it will work out for them, but I just don't know if it can at this point.

    Harry's meltdown was so sad, but I am very happy that Severus was able to get through to him and that he had the adoption papers! What a nice ending for the situation, and they both deserve it.

    Great job again!

    Author's Response:

    thank you very much! I enjoy having the parrallels relationships of Remus/Loki and Severus/harry! Remus is in an awful state of mind indeed, very lost. And no one can't help him right now, no one can understand... if I liked him, I would even feel sorry for the guy.

     

    Yes, actually had a bad case of breakdown. We will soon learn more about this, too :-)

     

Title: Chapter 39: Shadows of the Past 16 Sep 2009 7:37 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved this chapter, I understand Harry going back and reliving his nightmare but what a way to end it, with Snape adopting him! Post soon!

    Author's Response: thank you :-)

Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5