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Reviews For The Last Gift
Author's Response: I think that Shadow has the same problem ;-)
Before all that though, the Green Room scene was very touching! Poor Harry, overcome by nostalgia after realizing the stuff belonged to his mother. And Sev too, when he remembered everything about the room, and how he’d hoped Lily would come to the manor someday… *hugs them both* Author's Response: THank you very much ! I think he's not going to drink more whisky so soon lol! They both need your hugs, they really had an emotional chapter ;-)
I'm glad that Severus handled the green room well. I was really worried about how he'd react to Harry going in there. I like that you had him get rid of the memory though--really, it is probably best that he wasn't dwelling on such a sad event when he was alone. I think he'll be able to stomach the memories better with Harry there to distract him. Oh, and I love how you wrote the exact moment when Harry realizes the room is Lily's. You expressed his shock and anger at Severus for not sharing it so well. I also like how he was just totally overwhelmed and had to leave. That was the best part of this chapter, really. It was written very cleverly. Great job! -P.G. Author's Response: Well, to be honest, Harry is drunk... and a little dense. It just doesn't occure to him that he could be anyting else than just some good perception of him. Good boy. As for Loki... well, it' s probably a bit obvious ;-) Harry is getting very enthusiastic with Snape talking about family, but he truly is James' biological son here, this will not develop into a Severitus. Unless I have some strange idea later in this story, but so far... no! Poor Harry and Severus really had a hard chapter there ;-) thank you !
Author's Response: oh yes, poor Remus too, everyone had every reason to be veeeery embarassed in this chapter! The only one who enjoyed it a whole lot was Dumbledore, I think he nearly peed on himself with laugthers, to be honest ! ;-p
Author's Response: huhu thank you!
I hope that Sev is not too hard on the boy, although Harry was very foolish. I love the green tail. Too funny. I can't wait for the next update. Author's Response: thank you :-) I don't think that Snape will be too hard on his cat. He was not totally displeased with the show, after all !
and... "Pinch me, ... is he suckling at your robes?" You have a way with these characters that is truly fabulous. I am glad the issue of paternity has come out, and is now all clear... well... mostly. Brilliant chapter. Author's Response: thank you ;-) I think it will be clearer for Harry once he is sobber lol !
I cried about Lily's Room (I can't help thinking about it that way even if she didn't eevr stay there), especially when Harry buried his face in the fabric of her dresses. Bravo! Dancingkatz Author's Response: oh, I'm glad that someone actually was sad about this first part, strange enough but the French readers loved this part more and the English readers prefered the funny part! Thank you ;-)
B. My heart broke at the thoughts of how Harry felt when Snape was yelling at him. C. You're joking about the Rogue comment right?:) D. I loved this and can't wait for the next chapter. Your translator is wonderful and so are you :) Rogue Author's Response: A-Oh yes, you'll read a lot more about this! True issue there! B-Oh as for heartbreaking, way for the next chapter! C- totally not joking, I promise, on my cat's head! Rogue IS the French name of Snape ;-) D Thank you, she trully is a genius ;-)
In other events; I'm glad Severus decided against pushing Harry away! That would have truly crushed him. It was also surprising that Sev willed himself to speak with the headmaster, but clearly he deemed the conversation important. It was good of Harry to speak with him too, considering he was in need of some guidance after all that. I do wonder when Harry will finally get to ask about the whole Remus situation, every time the guy tries, something comes up, heh. BTW; I just loved the Shadow/ Severus interaction, so adorable! And yes Sev; all cats ARE that irresistible when they sleep ^_^ Author's Response: oh yes, and Snape is really not looking forward to tell Harry about this ! Really, really not! I don't think that at this point Snape could have go back totally... but the thought crossed his mind! I think that the Remus Revelation will come up in the next chapter, along with some other ones ! Oh well at least, if I'm right, the next chapter will be a 'tissue alert' one ;-) |
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