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Title: Chapter 35- Where Your Heart Lies 06 May 2009 8:06 pm
Reviewer: Quipped to Death (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic! Simply a roller coaster of emotions throughout this chapter and such a twist in that the mark has changed to Harry's. I'm so excited as to where this story is going. Can't wait till the next chapter. Again I say Fantastic!

    Author's Response: Oh well, it's going... a bit far maybe, but it's going ;-) A lot of emotions ahead though !
Title: Chapter 35- Where Your Heart Lies 06 May 2009 7:45 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    This is truly marvellous. I can barely breathe, thinking about the events in this chapter. I am so excited to read the next chapter that I'm bouncing in my chair.

    This, of course, is making my coworkers give me funny looks.

    The transformation of the mark is amazing. Severus' response to it is entirely accurate.

    Your ongoing saga is fabulous in how it shows how these two people, both terrified of being left alone (and reacting to that fear in their own similar ways--hiding and striking out), gradually learn to get over themselves and be there for each other. (And how's that for a convoluted sentence!)

    Good job!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much ! 'hi' to your coworkers ;-)

    I'm really glad you're enjoying it, this story has been my main 'personal production' in the past years, and it means a lot to me that people enjoy it !

Title: Chapter 35- Where Your Heart Lies 06 May 2009 9:24 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I like what you did with the mark. Very clever. I know Severus is very disturbed by the idea, but I think it will prove very helpful. If Harry is captured, he could summon Severus to him to help or he could alert Severus of danger through the mark. I don't think Harry will misuse it either.

    I'm very excited to hear Sev and Harry talk next chapter! I wonder if adoption will be brought up soon :D...I hope so! Good work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Well, it can be helpful or desastrous, depending of what they will do of it... but no, Harry wouldn't misuse it. It's going to be a real challenge though!

    The adoption is now dealt with ( one way or another ) in French, but it's chapter 35 ;-)

Title: Chapter 35- Where Your Heart Lies 06 May 2009 3:26 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, so I read this in French already, but I wasn't positive that I'd understand that Harry is Snape's master? Yikes.

    I was really anxious for it to be translated, because although I understood quite a bit, I wanted to really understand the story, which is getting better an better , by the way.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, you got it right ;-) Not in the way that Voldemort means it of course, but he is the master of the Mark!

     

Title: Chapter 35- Where Your Heart Lies 06 May 2009 2:58 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    so agonizing....the boys need each other so much as a family....a job well done

    Author's Response: thanks ;-)
Title: Chapter 35- Where Your Heart Lies 06 May 2009 2:14 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    What an interesting twist. One I never would have expectied--the Dark Mark changed to Harry from old Snake Face. I think that I'm going to causiously agree with Albus that, overall, this is a good thing. Harry would not abuse his "power" with anyone, let alone Sev. And it could be useful--a built in "Help Me" to call Sev to him if he was in trouble--or to get Sev out of trouble as a "beacon" to get home.

    Looking forward to your next update.
    V.

    Author's Response: I loved to change that mark in this way! But it's going to be o so many troubles... I can't tell more, but it will indeed be important !
Title: Chapter 34-Never Look Back 30 Apr 2009 6:23 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter. I enjoy Shadow more and more each time. Just wanted to let you know that I'm still reading and immensely enjoying. Thanks!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm flattered you are still reading :-)
Title: Chapter 34-Never Look Back 29 Apr 2009 7:46 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    My eyes are all teary now, where’s my tissues!

    Man, all those horribly devastating memories and emotions... I just can’t imagine someone feeling so lost inside. It makes my heart ache. When Harry finally got through to Severus, letting the man know how much he meant to him... I was so happy! It made me smile for a short while, and I was thinking that this was the final key to freeing Sev.

    And now... I honestly can't say I blame Sev for walking out on Dumbledore. Clearly he feels absolutely betrayed. But that last sentence made me feel dismayed. It stinks that Sev doesn’t realize they care for him! If only he’d looked back! *sob* (lol)

    PLEASE, please post again soon! I can’t tell you how happy I was to see this chapter finally up and posted, but now I'm once again desperate to read more ^_^

    Author's Response:

    That was bad, wasn't it ? But you never know what life throws at you next, even the best, sometimes... that's why you have to keep going, though it was not what Snape thought!

    You're right, Snape is now totally upset, at everyone really, but mostly Dumbledore... betrayl, really ? He REALLY didn't deserve this! and he can"t see pass through the betrayal ( did I put that sentence right ? not sure...)

    Next chapter is coming ;-)

Title: Chapter 34-Never Look Back 29 Apr 2009 4:07 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a powerful, heart-wrenching (and awesome) chapter! There was so much emotion here...Harry's fear and determination, Severus' despair and self-hatred, the healing when Harry was able to reach him and finally the hope for them to have a future together! How beautiful!

    I'm so happy and relieved that Harry was able to convince Severus how much he needed and loved him...and more, that he accepts him as is, even knowing all about the past. Severus needed that so much, and they are really and truly committed to one another and to being a family for one another. I'm so happy for them.

    But I do feel badly that there is such anger between Severus and Dumbledore, though I can't blame Severus a bit for it. I'm so eager for the next chapter! Thank you, Keina, and thank you RaeWhit for translating!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Kristeh ! It was a hard chapter to write! Yes, Harry was able to save Severus, but there is a price to that... a high price indeed! But nevermind, they've done a big step forward now!

    As for Dumbledore... oh well yes, he will have to pay too, and not with lemon drops!

Title: Chapter 34-Never Look Back 29 Apr 2009 3:08 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Squee!! What a brilliant ending! Can't wait for the update. Snape's fury was really funny.

    Author's Response: thank you ;-)

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