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Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 29 Apr 2009 2:33 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww. The endings so sad. I love Hermione though!
Title: Chapter 34-Never Look Back 27 Apr 2009 4:23 pm
Reviewer: Coconut Rum (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow...
    (This has become one of my all-time favorite stories and I look forward to every update. You've left me speechless...)

    Author's Response:

    ow, thank you very much *blushes*

    I can't tell how grateful I am to Raewhit for translating this story, I love to be able to share with English readers!

Title: Chapter 34-Never Look Back 27 Apr 2009 5:48 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a powerful chapter. And you were right, Albus really did catch it for that stupid mistake. I'm guessing sev would have seen true regret from, at least, Albus if he had looked back as well as two very distraut witches at his abrupt departure.

    I'm looking forward to your next update.
    V

    Author's Response: Yoi're absolutely right, that's what Shadow was sorry he didn't. But well, that's not how Snape works, he just doesn't look back... especially in anger!
Title: Chapter 34-Never Look Back 26 Apr 2009 10:40 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, wow! I loved Harry's look into Severus' life, though it was very sad. I really like the idea of Harry taking the mask off of Severus and telling him that he is his "Man in Black." I think there was a lot of meaning behind those words and Severus probably got it.

    I was a bit confused that Harry seemed to wake up as boy when he had went to sleep as a cat when he saved Severus. Could you explain what happens there?

    Now I really want to know what Harry saw on everyone's faces as Severus flooed away. I can't wait to read more!

    -P.G.

    P.S. I couldn't believe Harry said that he was "Severus' son" out loud! Wow, I wonder what the teachers think about that!

    Author's Response:

    A bit sad indeed ;-) You'll se very soon that there was indeed a lot of meaning behind that scene...

    as for Harry, remember that in his dream, he suddenly changed from cat to human? Well he didn't do it in dream only, actually. But shifting shape happens to him often whiles he sleep, that how he was discovered the first time!

    I can also tell you that Dumbledore wisely changed Severus' pyjamas to robes back during that time ;-p Not so stupid, after all!

    As for what Harry saw, I think you can guess it: regret and sorrow from all of the professor left ;-)

Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 26 Apr 2009 7:07 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my, I missed this chapter! I couldn't figure out why the next one didn't make sense! Now it does! LOL!

    Of course now, I already know what happens, but now it makes sense to me. Great chapter as usual.

    Author's Response: lol yes I've got some problems with my updates!
Title: Chapter 34-Never Look Back 26 Apr 2009 5:45 pm
Reviewer: pannymoomins (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant Chapter! loved how harry saved snape. bit odd tho, ive been getting emails informing me that you've updated but it claimed you've updated and released chapters 35-39....i take it there is an error with the website??

    Author's Response: well my account was being tested for some time and I didn't notice that there were 4 fake chapters for test... I deleted them afterward, but that might explain, yes!
Title: Chapter 34-Never Look Back 26 Apr 2009 5:39 pm
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    Shadow the rescuer!!! What an emotional chapter!!! Seeing the events of Snape's so sad life playing out relentlessly was so hard. Thank goodness Harry was able to show Snape how important he was to one lonely teenager. Of course, in spite of Harry's last thought of the chapter - that Snape should have seen the expressions on the faces of Dumbledore, Pomfrey and McGonaggle - this chapter has made me think some VERY DARK thoughts about Dumbledore and what his intentions were!!!! I assume you will be touching on these in the next few chapters?!?

    Author's Response: Thank you ;-) It was a hard journey for both Snape and Harry, but they did it! You're not the only one having dard thoughts about Dumbledore, SNape is not happy at all with him! His intentions were really honorable though, forced sleep as he claimed... but that went terribly wrong!
Title: Chapter 34-Never Look Back 26 Apr 2009 5:36 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg, that was so powerful Keina. I've got tears in my eyes.

    I love that Snape has decided to be Harry's rock. Harry needs someone to care for him and be responsible and be able to lean on.

    Oh, but now Harry's leaving Hogwarts and his friends. I hope that he can convince Severus to go back!

    Please update soon, I really love this story.

    Author's Response: thank you ;-) Lot of purrs!
Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 22 Apr 2009 3:01 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    OH, Can we kill Albus NOW for his little stunt? I know he ment well, but so many of his plans "for the good of. . . " just turn out rotten. He's not enough of a Slytherin to see all the possible NEGATIVE consequences--he's just to positive in his outlook. And then it comes back to bite them all.

    More soon please--don't leave me hanging here! (that was old Voldy in Harry's little "flash" and Harry really was with Sev in his "dream" wasn't he?)
    V.

    Author's Response: oh yes, dear Albus did a big mistake here... and he's going to be sorry for it ;-)
Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 22 Apr 2009 2:59 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sorry I haven't reviewed for a while, but I am still enjoying the story! I love the relationship between Severus and Harry, how Harry is struggling to fit back into Hogwarts and a somewhat normal life, the confusion over Loki...though I hate for Remus and Harry to be on the outs. I imagine that one day they might both find that misunderstanding quite funny.

    I had such a bad feeling when Harry had that dream and now I'm so worried for Severus! Harry has to find a way to help him!

    Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you ! As for the misunderstanding, it will sure get worse before it gets better ;-) and REmus will have a lot to say about... oh well, a lot of things actually!

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