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Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 22 Apr 2009 1:59 am
Reviewer: roguegambit (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that Snape wakes up next chapter. After posting the review for the last chapter, I went back and re-read it. Doh! Stupid Rogue! Saw EXACTLY what you were talking about. duh!

    Author's Response: hehe, you know what, Rogue is the French name of Snape ;-p
Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 21 Apr 2009 3:56 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, dear...Albus is in serious trouble now. The question now, of course, is will Harry wait for Snape to wake up before killing the Headmaster, and, if he does, will he get a chance to before Snape does? LOL

    Dang you and the cliffy, by the way.

    Author's Response: ohh yes , he is in serious trouble, I don't think there are a lot of people now that would say ' nice wise job, buddy' ;-p
Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 20 Apr 2009 1:43 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh noes!

    Dumbledore you’ve got one pissed off and frantic cat-who-lived on your hands now... I'm very worried how Harry's going to react to this news and am deeply concerned about our Sev :( The best of intentions led to the worst of results it seems... I hope Harry can someway get Sev out of that dream hurricane of despair (courtesy of Voldemort apparently), I have faith!

    As for the Harry and Remus situation... Misunderstandings are the worst, and I hope that the truth will be revealed to Harry soon before his friendship with Remus is ruined. Also, I’m still wondering over Hagrid, and hope he reemerges (alive)…

    Author's Response:

    Bery pissed-off kitty in sight, actually, yes! I can already tell you that a lot of people are going to be unhappy - no big spoiler here!

    You will hear about Remus and Hagrid soon, though I'm not sure it's a good thing ;-p

Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 19 Apr 2009 1:18 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Cruel author! That's a mean cliffie! Grr... Other than that, I really enjoyed the chapter. This one had some particularly funny parts, like Shadow's tail being green and then Harry looking for green hairs on his head, only to have Ron tell him he should be looking lower, lol. I'm surprised he didn't get smacked by Hermione for that comment.
    I also liked this phrase: "Just Voldemort wanting to say hullo, nothing serious." Harry, don't you know you should be worried about this?!

    I have a bit of a theory about what might have happened to Draco, but I better not put it down here. I hadn't realized how many people actually read reviews on other people's stories; I don't want to give anything away if I'm right.

    I'm excited to read what happens next--I hope the next chapter comes soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    That's funny how I hate cliffies in others' stories, and keep put some in mine!

    You haven't see the end of Shadow's tail neither ;-)

    Next chapter... I have to ask Raewhit if we should put some 'warning' before, I'm not sure, I remember this chapter was a bit hard to write...

Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 18 Apr 2009 9:30 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, NO! Harry and Snape just can't catch a break.

    I really hope the confusion about Remus gets sorted out soon. Poor Harry.

    I bet Harry can do something to help Snape. (Crossing fingers, pressing thumbs, and whatever other luck inducer I can think of.)

    Thanks for the update.

    K

    Author's Response:

    Don't worry, the confusion will get sorted out. That's the way it will be you have to worry about actually ;-)

    Well Harry is gonna try to do something, anyway...

Title: Chapter 33-You Just Can't Get Enough 18 Apr 2009 8:20 pm
Reviewer: Mimiheart (Signed) [Report This]
    No! BAD spot to stop. *stabs cliffie*

    Author's Response: *kitty eyes* sooorry:
Title: Chapter 32 Alone in the Dark 16 Apr 2009 2:25 am
Reviewer: roguegambit (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry...Remus....son? Please tell me I'm reading this as a godson?? Great chapter. I loved the Slytherin Green fur on Harry. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: I think you did just the same error as Harry, and missed the important part, just after the cat left the place ;-)
Title: Chapter 32 Alone in the Dark 15 Apr 2009 8:12 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I think the misunderstanding of Harry thinking Remus is his father was quite a twist and I loved how things ended in that scene, where Remus's true son was revealed. I thought maybe Remus was talking about Loki, but towards the end I wasn’t so sure. It was great how you made us readers wonder :)

    Poor Ron and Harry and their green hair! I loved how Ron was so ticked off and Luna jumped right in with her oddness :) I'm also really glad that things cooled down between them and Ron realized it truly was an accident, and how was trying to accept the new look, hehe.

    I'm really curious and concerned about what Harry and Ron walked into! Could it be a true trap or was he jumping to conclusions? Also, that scene with Draco was very revealing and I like how you mixed in the HBP-ness into it :D All in all, a great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    thank you ;-)

    There will be a lot more misunderstanding around this misunderstanding :-D The green thing will be back again too, no wa I let this go ;-)

    As for the end of this chapter, I really wasn't explicit enough, no big mystery there, they just walked into a room full of Gryffindors holding cameras, for the posterity !

Title: Chapter 32 Alone in the Dark 14 Apr 2009 10:50 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I picked up that Loki is Remus' son, without any problem. That makes things interesting nad I'm curious to see how things work out in regards to him.

    Poor Harry! Green fur and now a bunch of blackmail photos have been taken! I can just see his expression!

    Bravo! An excellent chapter (as usual).

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response:

    You're smart, very few people understood about Loki ;-)

    there will be a lot more confusion about Harry's misunderstanding though! poor Harry indeed ;-)

Title: Chapter 32 Alone in the Dark 14 Apr 2009 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! I think I just realised who Remus' son really is! Sorry, I misread. We are all like inattentive children; aren't we? Hee hee!

    Still absolutely adore this story, and I want a cat like Shadow! :)

    Author's Response:

    eheh, I think you found the right person ;-)

    I want a Shadow too-with his Snape of course, it's a package deal!


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