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Title: Chapter 27- Crimson and Gold 22 Feb 2009 6:08 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    *shakes head* Oh Ron… I love that red-head, but sometimes he just doesn’t think before he speaks. I’m glad he and Hermione are no longer concerned about Snape’s ‘motives’ concerning Harry now, and that they’re all cool again :)

    So, wolves and werewolves... the later apparently having found a way to communicate somewhat. Definitely a both curious and dangerous development, it’ll be a shame if students aren’t able to continue their education if they’re now werewolves too.

    I really hope Hagrid is alright! He's such a great guy, Harry and I both would be quite upset if he was killed. Glad Remus is alive though, at least Harry can be reassured with that thought, and I hope he recovers!

    Seems things are still rough between Harry and Dumbledore. I too am upset with him for allowing characters I and Harry love to be placed in danger, but I do think he cares about those people and was hurt by what Harry said.

    Anyways, can't wait to read more as always! And the missing evil cliffy was much appreciated! :D

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, Ron just had to put his big feet right in there, didn't he ;-)

    You got it right for the wolves and werewolves... they have find a way of communicating. And it's not a good news AT ALL for the Light side... trust me !

    Dear Hagrid... oh, there will be much more about Hagrid in this story. Yes indeed! and poor Dumbledore is really trying to do his best, only his best is sometimes not the best for everyone... especially where Snape and Harry are concerned!

    glad that you liked the cliffie lol, very few does ;-)

Title: Chapter 27- Crimson and Gold 22 Feb 2009 1:47 am
Reviewer: Mimiheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh! This was very nearly perfect.

    Author's Response: thanks ;-)
Title: Chapter 27- Crimson and Gold 21 Feb 2009 3:55 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely, long and fascinating chapter. I hope Ron has learned his lesson in keeping his opinions to himself on Harry and Severus' relationship. I think that had Ron had said that if Snape wanted to be a foster Dad to HArry, it would have gone over better than the term "mother hen". Actually, I'm rather proud of Harry in that he only slipped into being Shadow once (and that only when he was absolutely furious)because there was enough stress going floating around that I was actually surprised that he didn't slip into being Shadow the moment he got to the lab at Snape Manor.

    I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapters. Your plot is intriguing and your characterisations are excellent. Bravo!

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response:

    oh, as for long, not so loud please, Raewhit nearly killed me when she saw the length of chapter 24... I must admit I might have gone a bit overenthusiastic with that one !

    Ron has learned his lesson, but he sure won't be the only one to think that way, unfortunately! Harry is getting better at controling himself, but the cat in him can still get the best of him at times, for sure! Dear Shadow... well, let's just say that if I was any of the Gryffindors, I wouldn't try to pick something in Harry's plate, they might well end up with a clawed hand ;-)

Title: Chapter 27- Crimson and Gold 21 Feb 2009 1:19 am
Reviewer: roguegambit (Signed) [Report This]
    I had the feeling you love being evil. This chapter? Wonderful. I felt so sorry for poor Harry. I thought it was bloody brilliant having Harry transform to attack Ron. I loved it. Poor Hagrid. You're not gonna kill him are you??? Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: oh your feeling is totally acurate, I'm afraid! I'm glad you loved this chapter!As for Hagrid, well... wait and see, as usual ;-)
Title: Chapter 27- Crimson and Gold 20 Feb 2009 10:55 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Phew! I just couldn't stand the suspense!

    Glad everyone is ok. Well...maybe not Lupin, totally, but at least he's alive!

    As usual, you have written a brilliant chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!
    Please hurry with that!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Remus is not too damaged, he will be ok soon, actually. But there will be some health problem soon, though, not for Lupin!
Title: Chapter 27- Crimson and Gold 20 Feb 2009 9:53 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for a wonderful chapter. You are doing a fabulous job portraying Harry's emotional neediness and instability.

    I particularly appreciate a cliffie free chapter! Please update quickly!

    Author's Response: thank you very much! A bit more fluff in the next chapter ;-)
Title: Chapter 27- Crimson and Gold 20 Feb 2009 8:40 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    No evil cliffie-true-but lots of quesitons! Hagrid, Remus, How it all happened? and so many more.

    Great chatper!
    V.

    Author's Response: very valid point! What happened to Remus and Hagrid will be a major issue! we're not going to see Hagrid for a long time now, but Remus will have a few things to say. more than a few, actually!
Title: Chapter 27- Crimson and Gold 20 Feb 2009 7:16 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my. I have tears. Wet eyes. And it's all your fault.

    Really good story.

    Author's Response: ow, I feel terribly guilty. I think. ;-)
Title: Chapter 2- Before Leaving 16 Feb 2009 4:11 am
Reviewer: Mebbles (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Overall, I like the plot, and the grammar is good. However, there are way too many exclamation marks. You could do with about a quarter of the ones you have now. That is the only annoying thing, and otherwise, I really enjoy reading this.

    Author's Response: Ah yes, actually I think I was a bit overenthousiastic to start with, but that gets better afterward ;-)
Title: Chapter 26-End Summer's Dream 15 Feb 2009 11:39 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG Please update quickly! I gotta know what happens with Snape!

    I love Harry telling Snape that he wants a family. I really hope that Snape can give that to him. I hope that he won't let his insecurities stop him.

    Author's Response:

    Harry wants to know, too ;-)

    Snape and Harry are going to have a hard time to get that damn family working but... they're on their way:


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