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Title: Chapter 26-End Summer's Dream 15 Feb 2009 8:39 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness, it sounds like all hell has broken loose! I hope Snape is okay (though I'm 100% sure he won't die, after all, you've written 40-some chapters on this and I don't think that's the route you're taking this story down, lol).

    My favorite part was when Snape asked Harry if he wanted a family and Harry said no. I wanted to shout "Liar!" so badly then. Of course he wants and would value a family. Right now, I think Snape is being held back from asking because he doesn't think he'll be all that Harry needs. I'm sure he'll surprise himself though.

    Great job--you've got me really anxious about what's happening at Hogwarts!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes don't worry, I don't intend on killing poor Snape so soon lol!

    Harry is not really confortable with what he wants yet, and neither is Snape, actually. AS for what happened in Hogwarts... it was really, really bad!

Title: Chapter 26-End Summer's Dream 14 Feb 2009 4:23 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really curious about just what kind of creatures were set upon the school. Those poor students, I hope the Hogwarts staff can get things back under control! Best of luck to them.

    It's good that Harry’s improving in his transformations though, his friends sure were surprised when he and the Professor came through the flu together :). As for that dream he had, it sounded disturbing and It’s nice that Harry had Sev there to help him out of it.

    Author's Response:

    There were actually quite a lot of creatures attacking, a few of them really were dangerous, and one of them we will here about soon!

    Wait and see ;-)

Title: Chapter 25 -A Black and White Photo 14 Feb 2009 2:31 am
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this! Shadow chasing the miniature broom is just too perfect. Such a cat he is!
Title: Chapter 26-End Summer's Dream 14 Feb 2009 12:25 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    ooh, intense chapter. please update soon!! i understand the difficulty with translating it, really i do, but i don't know that i could stand to have this cliffie weighing on my mind for too long.

    Author's Response: don't worry, Raewhit is really working fast ;-)
Title: Chapter 26-End Summer's Dream 14 Feb 2009 12:07 am
Reviewer: roguegambit (Signed) [Report This]
    Argh. I've said it before and I'll say it again: you're evil. I want another chapter! Is Snape going to petition for guardianship at some point? Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job.

    Author's Response:

    oh but I enjoy being evil!

    Yes, Snape will petition for full guardianship. I am actually writting the chapte now, it's chapter 43 I think. A lot will happen in the meantime...

Title: Chapter 26-End Summer's Dream 13 Feb 2009 10:17 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugh! I hate those evil cliffies! Please update this wonderful story quickly!

    Author's Response: thanks ;-)
Title: Chapter 26-End Summer's Dream 13 Feb 2009 7:47 pm
Reviewer: Mimiheart (Signed) [Report This]
    *meep*

    Author's Response: moop?
Title: Chapter 26-End Summer's Dream 13 Feb 2009 4:22 pm
Reviewer: Aeryun (Signed) [Report This]
    NOOOOO!!!! OMG! I leave for Greece for two months next Wed, and this is where I leave off before I go. Oh, I'm going to die from having to wait. You know, I've been kicking myself for taking Latin instead of French in highschool.

    Oohh, I can't wait for more. Hugs, Aery

    Author's Response:

    oh, too bad! Well you will sure have a wonderful time in Greece, don't worr, you will soon forget about the Potter-cat ;-)

    This chapter is actually the end of first part, beginning of part 2 in Hogwart, with new ennemies and new problems... and solutions :-)

    You'll have a few chapters when you'll come back, for sure :-)

Title: Chapter 25 -A Black and White Photo 07 Feb 2009 4:56 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Harry now knows his friends are alive, and that he was able to get out of his transformation. Though a tough experience to endure, what with all the emotions and thoughts flooding through his mind, it was a good idea for him to be brought to the Burrow.

    I'm curious about the manor's origin, and look forward to finding out more about it. I also can't wait for Harry to get back to Hogwarts and resume a somewhat normal life with his friends. It's good he has Severus there for him too, I think they reached another level of closeness in this chapter.
Title: Chapter 25 -A Black and White Photo 07 Feb 2009 12:23 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    well, that certaintly wasn't the reaction I'd been expecting from Snape - but I'd forgotten that Harry hadn't yet found out about Snape's involvement in the prophecy. I thought it was really good! Ron and Hermione were done really well and I loved the cat stuff. Also the 'insecure Snape' is written brilliantly too!

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