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Title: Chapter 23-Fiat Lux 17 Jan 2009 12:06 pm
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    awwwwww! yay! that was awesone

    Author's Response: thank you :-)
Title: Chapter 23-Fiat Lux 17 Jan 2009 7:14 am
Reviewer: Potterworm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh thank god you didn't kill Remus! I would've been so mad! Thanks for writing, because this was another excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: Poor Remus is going to have a big part in the coming chapters actually ( after chapter 30 ), a bit against his will, though ;-)
Title: Chapter 23-Fiat Lux 17 Jan 2009 7:13 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another excellent chapter. I loved the way Severus came to see Harry as "just" Harry.

    Thanks so much to Raewhit for translating!

    Author's Response: just Harry and not just Shadow, too, which is actually good for both of them ;-)
Title: Chapter 23-Fiat Lux 17 Jan 2009 5:45 am
Reviewer: Aeryun (Signed) [Report This]
    I really, really do not like Canon Remus. For many reasons, I won't fill up your review box with. That said, I'm glad you went with the Dursleys. I believe the impact from them dying was more believable in the end. :D Can't wait for more!
    Hugs,
    Aery

    Author's Response:

    I really don't like him either, to be honest... where was the guy all the time that Harry needed him ? he's just a bloody coward, in my books. But well, he is not going to be much better in this story, though he will have reasons for it.

    And yes, poor Dursleys, mmm... but that will be quite bad for Harry though. a bit more guilt...

Title: Chapter 23-Fiat Lux 17 Jan 2009 5:03 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wonderful....i hope Sev gets to adopt harry soon

    Author's Response: mmm well 'soon' in story time, I think so, but as for the 'real time'... I am writting chapter 42 right now, and we are still in september ! geeeee...
Title: Chapter 22 Protego 11 Jan 2009 5:35 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no, who died?! It wasn't Remus, was it? Hagrid, Hermione, the Weasleys?! *bursts into sudden tears* I'll just have to cross my fingers I guess and wait for your next update.

    This chapter was full of intense moments, the emotions that both Harry and Snape felt were expressed wonderfully! I could really feel how desperate their situation was, and the sudden hope Harry felt when things finally seemed to die down. Awesome!

    I'm very curious about what this new power level Harry has acquired, how will his magic behave now and will he have any trouble controlling it? To quote Olivander 'Very curious...' ;)

    I really want to read the next chapter and find out what's going to happen! I'll be waiting in anticipation :D

    Author's Response:

    who died ? Oh, I'm sure you'll cry rivers there too... you'll see ;-p

    Thank you very much ! I loved to writte this chapter, all the more that it will implie so much for the future ! as for Harry's powers, well, it won't be a major point, but yes, it will of course matter, in more than a way !

    Next chapter is just published, so... a few answers there ;-)

Title: Chapter 22 Protego 09 Jan 2009 7:18 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful! I really ought to be sleeping as I have to get up and go to work in 6 hours, but I really needed to read this chapter. I loved everything about it. THe sacrificial magic was... (shaking my head, trying to find the right words)... I can't coherently explain how it made me feel, but its all good, I promise! I loved seeing Harry taking care of Severus and Sev telling HArry that he was Sev's cat, not matter what, just had me beaming. Now, I need to find out who has died. I hope it's not one of the Weasley's or Hermione. Bravo!

    Author's Response: Oh, I'm really glad you liked it ! There are a few elements in this story ( 41 chapters now ) that I was proud of, but this one, the sacrificial idea, was from far my favorite, I couldn't wait to see the reactions here ! There will be a lot more about it, too. I hope you'll like what comes next ;-)
Title: Chapter 22 Protego 09 Jan 2009 6:19 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    that was fantastic!

    Author's Response: thank you ;-)
Title: Chapter 22 Protego 09 Jan 2009 4:22 am
Reviewer: lennox03237 (Signed) [Report This]
    what a cliff hanger please write more soon

    Author's Response: Raewhit is working on it ;-)
Title: Chapter 22 Protego 09 Jan 2009 4:02 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    love it.....but such a cliffy, you must update soon.

    Author's Response: oh, it was a nice little cliffy, come on ;-p

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