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Title: Chapter 21-Dancing In the Haze 23 Dec 2008 7:23 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    ugh.... is that good or bad??? i mean, it would be sweet if voldemort was rendered a squib, they could just finish him off, but would that turn harry evil or something?

    Author's Response: ah, that's a good question actually.. let just say that Snape won't be too fond of the idea:!
Title: Chapter 21-Dancing In the Haze 23 Dec 2008 1:21 am
Reviewer: roguegambit (Signed) [Report This]
    *blink* Absorbing Voldy's powers? Interesting concept. You are no longer evil my dear. ^_^ I've enjoyed the plot so far and now am really curious about the storyline. Can't wait for the next one. Um, question: are they able to see the magic re-entering Harry's body with something like a life meter (video game style) beside him or something? Just curious.

    Author's Response:

    Ah, good point, I knew I should stop playing World of Warcraft while writting ;-)

    No, actually, it's more like a "aura" color surrounding someone's body, visible only with a spell. Something Snape can also feel quite well, as in this story, he has the usefull talent of 'feeling' magic ! Not a major plot line, mind you, but something that is going to be useful to him in a next future !

Title: Chapter 21-Dancing In the Haze 22 Dec 2008 11:12 pm
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you ! My translator is taking a very well deserved christmas break in traslation, but she made me a wonderful surprise today... anyway, more news about the cat in a few days ;-)
Title: Chapter 21-Dancing In the Haze 22 Dec 2008 9:26 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this is interesting... does this mean that if Harry wanted, he could try to take Voldemort's powers too and weaken him? Or is it simply the powers Harry had received in his scar before? Either way, I'd be hesitant to take on such an evil person's powers.

    I'm glad Harry has got his own magic back though, and that he has Snape there to help him through it all. It's great that he truly has someone he can depend on and feel safe with. Hopefully Harry will eventually realize that the illusions he had were just that, and that his friends are alive and no one is disappointed in him.

    Anyways, as I always say, I look forward to reading more!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, you got it, the link that Voldemort created to steal Harry's magic is getting back on him ! It was a stupid game really, to try this kind of thing with someone who shares your mind. But you're right too, it might not be a very good idea for Harry to go into this, though the thought is exciting, he is already striving with his new power ! and that is sure to put him in a dangerous situation if he tries, which Severus definetely won't appreciate.

     

    And yes, there is the problem of the illusions... ah, someone has his hands quite full here, certainly ;-)

Title: Chapter 21-Dancing In the Haze 22 Dec 2008 8:59 pm
Reviewer: BladesoftheValkyrie (Signed) [Report This]
    Dun dun dun...

    Great work! Keep it up! ^_^

    Author's Response: thank you ;-)
Title: Chapter 21-Dancing In the Haze 22 Dec 2008 7:38 pm
Reviewer: Mimiheart (Signed) [Report This]
    I should mention I hate cliffies with a passion--but this is still wonderful. And I'm glad to see them caring for each other.

    Author's Response: hehe, it's funny, I hate them too in other's fanfic, but I just can't resist putting them in mine ;-)
Title: Chapter 21-Dancing In the Haze 22 Dec 2008 6:15 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, Keina! I love how tender and loving Severus is with Harry now, and how Harry knows that he can trust Severus and depend on him. It seems that he has made a good start on healing, and I'm so happy that Harry has his magic back...and if he can take some of Voldemort's, all the better!

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thank you ! Severus will soon show the extend of his care in a very special way... just wait for the next chapter :-)
Title: Chapter 21-Dancing In the Haze 22 Dec 2008 6:13 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I hope Harry can manage to steal all of Voldy's powers.

    Author's Response: You can be sure that he will at least try -)
Title: Chapter 21-Dancing In the Haze 22 Dec 2008 5:59 pm
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    yay good chapter keep it up

    Author's Response: thank you !
Title: Chapter 20 - In the Shadow 21 Dec 2008 3:30 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad I finally got to catch up with this story, so much has happened since Lucius captured Harry...

    The torture Harry endured was absolutely horrible. Poor guy, he not only suffered immense mental pain, but got sliced up by a bunch of creeps and is having his magic drained from him. Which is truly awful, as Harry would be devastated to lose it. Voldemort and his followers are truly sick. Good thing the draining of his powers seems to have stopped now…

    Severus was amazing! He did all he could to get Harry out of there, my heart was in my throat when the portkey didn't activate. Lily and the Marauders were brilliant as well. Didn't Harry dream about them coming to help? If so, guess it came true, and I'm glad it did!

    Sev really has his hands full now. He not only has to protect Harry physically from the danger of Voldemort coming after him again, but Harry has so much mental stress and confusion. Best of luck to them both.

    I can't wait ’till the next chapter :)

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, Harry losing his magic would be very bad indeed... for everyone ! but Snape won't let thathappen, will he ;-)

    He will soon have his hands more than full, though...


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