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Reviews For The Last Gift
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 04 Dec 2008 6:59 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG good chapter keep it up

    Author's Response: thank you, I'll try ;-)
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 04 Dec 2008 12:47 am
Reviewer: fluff (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this story, Snape as slipped out of charater and yet is in, it just seems right. More please and soon as you can.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I try to keep them IC, though sometimes circumstances make it hard ;-)
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 11:48 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm not sure why anyone would leave at this point. This chapter was quite . . maybe wonderful isn't the right word--for it certainly isn't very happy but an excellent addition to the story and there is hope now. even with the surge of death eaters after them still. Let's be honest--that's not new to our Harry at all--regular day really.

    Looking forward to "what comes next!"

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you !

    I re-read the next chapter, and I must admit that it is really quite depressing. But yes, you can't expect Harry to come out of this pink and shinny, can you ? the awakening will be hard... but the worst it past now, at least ! ...well, I think so ;-)

Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 9:58 pm
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't know why you lost readers because of this chapter. I think it was really good. I really like this story and can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you, there is a lot more coming ;-)
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 9:45 pm
Reviewer: xoAngelicDemise (Signed) [Report This]
    How could you have lost readers?! It was absolutely fantastic! :) Hurry up with more!

    Author's Response: Thank you, I know that Raewhit has already started the next one ;-)
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 8:53 pm
Reviewer: lucie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is absolutely wonderful. I think it's awful that you have had bad reviews and really wonder about some people. It is easy to see that you have put so much time and effort into your writing. The end of this chapter had been in tears and yet gave me hope at the same time.

    Loved it, loved it, loved it!

    Author's Response:

    well it wasn't bad reviews actually but half of my readers simply gave up ! quite frustrating ! Actually, I experienced my first flames with the last chapter... in English ! some anonymous guy/girl telling me that he as bored with waiting for an update ( after 4 days?!) and who did I think I was, did I think he was going to reread the story if/when I decided to update ? And then some rude comment about punctuation, and asking me if I ever read a book. Made me feel like slapping someone around.

     Anyway, I'm glad you liked it, the next chapter is quite sad too, but it does get better after that !

Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 7:48 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Are you out of your mind? Do you honestly think that we would ever abandon this brilliant story?

    I love it! Warm and fuzzy! We really needed that after the last chapter! I can "feel" Snape's protectiveness!

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Oh he is feeling possessive toward 'his cat'! A lot of fluff in the next chapter too, though it will be tainted with angst too... poor Harry will have a hard awakening !
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 7:38 pm
Reviewer: roguegambit (Signed) [Report This]
    They gave up on you? Plebs! I really enjoyed this chapter. Something about it just such a human reaction to a situation. Great chapter and can't wait to read the next one.

    Author's Response: Thank you ! I hope I didn't overdo the characters' reactions actually, I really want to keep them IC ! but well, with cats, you know ;-)
Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 6:49 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I am loving your story very much......but this chapter was a little too painful for me. Please tell me that Harry will quickly come to realize the truth of his torture and begin to deal with it quickly.

    Thanks so much for sharing your gift with all of us.

    Author's Response:

    thank you ! Yes, the warning 'torture' was not excessive, I think ;-)

    Hum actually the next chapter is about a very confused and weak harry, but I promise that Snape will take care of it! Though he will be having a hard time himself, faced to the situation. Taking points won't help him here...

Title: Chapter 19-That Night 03 Dec 2008 6:32 pm
Reviewer: jolisgsd@gmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter as usual. I don't understand why you would have lost readers.

    So glad your updates are happening fast.

    Author's Response: oh yes, I can believe how fast Raewhit is ! I'm ashamed of my own slow path at translating AYLNO in French !

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