A good chapter! It brings the balance back into the story that was slightly disrupted in the previous one and gives me hope that Harry will get better! I hope he'll also be reassured about the Weasleys and his other friends soon! Severus really is stubborn here, isn't he? Dumbledore should have pinned him to the bed, lol.
Author's Response: Oh yes, he is stubborn ! Dumbledore sure was boiling inside all that time ;-) Reassure Harry will actually be a serious issue... but wait and see ;-)
| Title: Chapter 19-That Night
| 03 Dec 2008 4:47 pm
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| Reviewer: toast (Signed)
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well i thought that was great lol i've been waiting for ever for you to add this i couldn't wait to find out wut happened to them :)
Author's Response: Oh and wait, there is a lot coming ;-)
| Title: Chapter 19-That Night
| 03 Dec 2008 4:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Nicol Leoraine (Anonymous)
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Hey, I think it was a good chapter. Dunno why you lost the French readers, but I liked it. Can't wait for the next one, hopefully with much more awake Harry in it, lol. And also very curious of chapter 22!
Author's Response: Thank you ! There are very few 'Snape adopts Harry " stories in French so maybe people just lost interest after the 'big attack' ? I dont know ! And yes, I am sooo thrilled about reading your reactions on chapter 22 ! I wrote it something like a year ago now in French, and all the time thinking ' if only I could discuss this idea with the English guys', but I wanted to keep it for the right time. It might not be that much of an idea, but when I had it, it seemed to me a really good one in this kind of fanfics, something I never read anywhere. Anyway... until chapter 22 ;-)
You didn't lose me! I still get very excited every time I see an update notice in my inbox, and I am looking forward to seeing where you go with this. I'm practially drooling at the thought of another 20 chapters. ^_^ Keep up the fantastic work!
Author's Response: I'm glad I didn't ! I'm working on chapter 40 right now, but I'll have to write faster if I want to actually have a christmas chapter for christmas... believe it or not, chapter 40 is still in september ! times is soooo slow !
Wonderful and beautifully written. I'm definitely not giving up on your story and looking very forward to th upcoming chapters when you get around to posting the English versions. Poor Harry and poor Severus! And I have to say poor Dumbledore. It seems all his errors have come home to roost with what happened to Harry (and Sev as well). It didn't surprise me to find that Severus had multiple injuries. He was running on fear, worry and adrenaline and that would tend to block such things. As always, bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you ! Yes, I'm quite cruel with my characters indeed ! And yes Severus was injured too. Nothing really important, but still... it will soon become part of a bigger problem ! wait and see ;-)
*cheers wildly* Go Lily, go Severus, go Harry! Awesome chapter - it had me on the edge of my seat - so many near misses and so exciting! Well done!
btw - I think 'buggle' is meant to be 'bugle' - great chapter title anyway!
Author's Response: Oops hier sorry, I keep writting this word wrong ! It was the title of a song, from the movie 'Spirit', a sad song but I love it ! I always sing it when I feel desperate ;-) Next chapter will still be a bit angsty though !
| Title: Chapter 18- Sound The Bugle Now
| 28 Nov 2008 3:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous)
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Ayiyi! :o Those last two chapters were intense. Well done, but intense. I'm so glad they've made it out. Phew!
Looking forward to reading more,
A New Reader
Author's Response: Oh yes, and it's not really over either, bad Voldy has not say his last word for now ! glad you liked it ;-)
Thanks for the heads-up. Great chapter and it wasn't as painful as I feared. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I really like the touch of Lily. ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you ! next chapter will be quite eventful too, but the worst is ehind now ;-)
| Title: Chapter 18- Sound The Bugle Now
| 28 Nov 2008 2:29 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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I think you mean 'bugle', not 'buggle' in the title.
Otherwise a splendid chapter, lots of angst and action.
Author's Response: yes right, I corrected, I don't know why 'buggle' seemed to be the right spelling to me !
| Title: Chapter 18- Sound The Bugle Now
| 28 Nov 2008 12:29 am
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| Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! Wow, the scene in the cemetary with Lily, James, and Sirius, and poor Harry and Severus was really good. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you ! There will be more indeed, poor Harry is not safe yet !
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