| Title: Chapter 17- Three Times a Heartbreak
| 21 Nov 2008 10:56 pm
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| Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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Fantastic chapter!!! Loved it!!! More soon, please!!! ;)
Author's Response: thank you ;-)
| Title: Chapter 17- Three Times a Heartbreak
| 21 Nov 2008 10:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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This is an absolutely magnificent chapter, The only words I can say are thank you.
Author's Response: well, thank you too ;-)
| Title: Chapter 17- Three Times a Heartbreak
| 21 Nov 2008 8:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Nakago (Signed)
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Ha! I told you - Severus was stupid. In the last chapter, of course. Here he is wiser. What a pity it's a little too late...
Wonderful chapter, really. I'm trembling right now. And Credulo is a great idea. What an effect on mind...
Yup, one of the best fanfictions certainly. As always I'm waiting for more.
Author's Response: oh yes he is payig for his stupidity now ! And it's his potion that helped torture and confuse Harry... 50 points from Slytherin, M. Snape !
| Title: Chapter 17- Three Times a Heartbreak
| 21 Nov 2008 8:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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OMG! That was the best chapter yet, and Reina your writing skills are remarkable. And RaeWhit, you have done a marvelous job with the translation, you definitely have a gift as well, because you have managed to translates Keina's thoughts perfectly.
I really need some tissues now though! Lovely, and deep. I can't even find the words to express how much I am impressed with this story!
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| Title: Chapter 16- A Matter of Trust
| 19 Nov 2008 4:19 am
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| Reviewer: Slythami (Signed)
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You are sooo right ... bad bad BAD cliffie. Does Voldie know that Snape is a spy and sacrificed killing him at that point in time so that he could kill Harry, call Snape and THEN kill Snape? oOo ... that would make him smart! AHhh theories! Update soon!
Author's Response: lol I love theories ! You'll find out soon though, I promise ;-)
Gasp! That truly was a wondeful cliffhanger! Poor Harry - first Sev being mean to him and then being kidnapped - definitely not one of his best days. Serves Sev right though for being so cold - he's so clueless sometimes! I hope you write more soon, good luck with the next chapter.
Author's Response: That was really a 'bad luck, bad choices' day ! A lot of people here have been taking the wron option, but ah... wait and see ;-)
Oh my Stars!!!
Malfoy just stole Severus's cat!! I actually feel just a little bit sorry for Malfoy when Sev catches up with him.
Nobody messes with Severus's cat. ;-}
I love the story, very good job.
I can't wait to find out what happens with Sev and Harry. I am wondering if this may turn into a Severus adopts Harry fic...
However it turns out, I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
Leilia
Author's Response: ahah, yes, the cat's been stolen ! Bad day for the kitty... I hope you'll like the next chapter ;-)
OMG! Poor Harry, he must feel absolutely horrible. I could almost hear his heart breaking, my eyes teared up during those last scenes at the Manor.
Darn it! Why did stupid Lucius have to go and rear his ugly head?! I'll be crossing my fingers for Harry, that he'll somehow get out of this horrible mess. That, and that things can be managed with him and Snape.
Absolutely brilliant chapter, it made my heart clench. Here’s hoping to read another chapter soon! Please post again when you can :D
Author's Response: Oh yes, Harry feels really, really bad. But it's nothing in comparison to what is going to happen. Wait until next chapter ;-)
| Title: Chapter 16- A Matter of Trust
| 16 Nov 2008 3:59 am
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| Reviewer: Nicole (Anonymous)
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Oooh, that was so, so, so, so evil! *sniff* Bet Snape regrets that one. Poor Harry. Part of me is wondering if he even really cares what happens to him anymore. I hope you update really, really, really soon! ^__^ Happy writing!
Author's Response: oh yes, Snape does regret it now ! he will regret it all the more in a short time !
| Title: Chapter 16- A Matter of Trust
| 16 Nov 2008 2:33 am
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| Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: thank you ;-)
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